Question

假設你叫李華，昨天收到了筆友David的e-mail，得知他不久要來杭州，他想了解如何學好中文。請你用英文給他回復一封e-mail，介紹學習中文的體會和方法，提出你的建議，以及表達你幫助他學好中文的愿望。你提出以下建議：

到中文培訓機構上課

多看中文節(jié)目

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注意：1.對所給要點，逐一陳述，適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

           2.詞數(shù)100左右。開頭和結尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear David,

I’m glad to learn that you’re coming to Hangzhou.____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

  Well, there’re so many methods and I think the following suggestions will be of great help for you. Firstly, you can attend some classes to learn Chinese, where the teachers will teach you a lot. Secondly, reading Chinese books and watching Chinese TV programmes will do good to your listening and reading in Chinese. Thirdly, you can also learn some Chinese songs, which is a good way to learn Chinese well. In addition, you’d better make some Chinese friends, from whom you can learn more about Chinese language and customs. What’s more, keep reminding yourself that practice makes perfect. If you practice every day, I’m sure that your Chinese will be pretty good before long.

I’m looking forward to your coming.  

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：電子郵件是很常見的一種應用文體裁，格式開頭均已給出，所以寫作時只需表達清楚要點建議即可。對于這種建議性寫作內(nèi)容，要開門見山寫出寫信的原因以及建議的內(nèi)容和提出建議的理由。在語言方面，要簡明扼要，目的明確，而且要有合理性和說服力。在語氣上一定要委婉禮貌，要顧及對方的感受。此外寫作時還要注意細節(jié)上的補充和連接詞的恰當使用，以使文章行文連貫，邏輯性強。常用的寫作句型：I am writing to share some advice with you . I’m willing to give a hand to you .It should be a good idea for …..等。

【亮點說明】文章開門見山提出寫作話題和目的，然后用firstly ,secondly ,thirdly ,in addition 和what’s more 等詞匯依次羅列出作者的五條建議，這樣的寫作手法使文章層次清晰、結構分明、讓人一目了然。而且并列句there’re so many methods and I think the following suggestions will be of great help for you.以及定語從句where the teachers will teach you a lot. Secondly,條件狀語從句 If you practice every day,等多種復合句將一些松散的信息連接起來，使句子結構更為緊湊，同時也顯示了作者對這些高級、復雜句式的靈活掌握。

考點：考查提綱作文。