Question

你作為學生會主席，為了擁有一個更美好的校園，向全校學生發(fā)出環(huán)保倡議，以告知大家保護環(huán)境是我們中學生應盡的責任。請根據(jù)以下要點寫一份倡議書。
1．步行或騎車上學 
2．謹記關燈和關水龍頭  
3．愛護校園的一草一木，不亂扔垃圾
4．循環(huán)利用資源，為環(huán)保做貢獻   
參考詞匯：水龍頭tap
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 
3．開頭和結尾已為你寫好。
Dear friends,
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Thank you!
The Students’ Union

Answer 1

Dear friends,
Do you want to live in a beautiful world? If so, it is our duty to protect the environment. To fulfill this task, we should bear the following in mind.
To begin with, we should stick to the habit of going to school on foot or by bike. In addition,  we should protect the environment of our school by not throwing rubbish around. Remember to turn off the taps and the lights when we don’t use them and it’s important to recycle everything that can be recycled. Last but not least, we should care for plants and trees in our schoolyard and be civilized students. Only in this way can we make our schoolyard more and more beautiful.
Let’s all take action now and contribute to the environmental protection.  
Thank you!
The Students’ Union

試題分析：本文是一個倡議書，也是提綱作文，應該按所要求的內(nèi)容來寫，根據(jù)所列的內(nèi)容盡量以簡明扼要的語言來表達。這篇作文要求較靈活，題目中只是一個提綱，還要考生去充實里面的內(nèi)容：比如自己好的學習習慣應是能夠提高學習效果的，不好的學習習慣會阻礙學習的。寫作時要注意使用高級的詞匯和復雜的句型，也要適當?shù)厥褂藐P聯(lián)詞承前啟后，用詞要得體，符合語言環(huán)境。
【亮點說明】范文中有一些很好的短語：stick to “堅持”，care for“關心”take action “采取行動”，contribute to 有助于，還有一些復雜的句式：If so,  it is our duty to protect the environment. 這句話用了省略句和it做形式主語，To fulfill this task, we should bear the following in mind. 這句話用了不定式做目的狀語， Remember to turn off the taps and the lights when we don’t use them and it’s important to recycle everything that can be recycled. 這句話里面有定語從句， Only in this way can we make our schoolyard more and more beautiful.這句話是倒裝句，還有文章還使用了一些關聯(lián)詞To begin with, In addition,  Last but not least, 使文章更加連貫。