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3．假設(shè)你是李華，距高考還有2個(gè)月左右，現(xiàn)在你正在備戰(zhàn)高考，中學(xué)生活即將結(jié)束，在這個(gè)特殊時(shí)期，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給自己的父母寫(xiě)一封信．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1．感謝父母多年來(lái)，特別是高三這一年來(lái)的關(guān)懷．
2．向父母簡(jiǎn)要匯報(bào)自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況．
3．高考之后幫父母做些家務(wù)和自己的打算．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
Dear parents，
      Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously．
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Yours
LI Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，在距高考還有2個(gè)月左右，在這個(gè)特殊時(shí)期給自己的父母寫(xiě)一封信，表達(dá)對(duì)父母的感謝、匯報(bào)自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況并談?wù)勛约旱拇蛩悖畬?xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．感謝父母多年來(lái)，特別是高三這一年來(lái)的關(guān)懷； 2．向父母簡(jiǎn)要匯報(bào)自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況； 3．高考之后幫父母做些家務(wù)和自己的打算．重要短語(yǔ)：thanks to （多虧了，由于），on this special occasion （在這個(gè)特殊的場(chǎng)合），words fail sb（話(huà)說(shuō)不出來(lái)），made some progress （取得進(jìn)展），get along well with （進(jìn)展得很好），perform one'sability（表現(xiàn)某人的能力），set one's mind at rest （使某人安心），intend to do （想要做，打算去做），mean to do sth （打算（意欲）讓某人做某事），in person （親自），go on well with （進(jìn)展順利；與…相處融洽），have a rest （休息）．
【高分句型】
1．I can say nothing but thanks to you both on this special occasion，①because words have failed me ②when I want to express my thanks to you both for the loving care ③you have shown for me，
①這里是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
②這里是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
③這里是由省略了關(guān)系代詞that或which的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是 the loving car，定語(yǔ)從句中動(dòng)詞shown缺少賓語(yǔ)．
2．I intend to help you do some housework which I have seldom done before．And I also mean to learn to cook for you both in person．
這里是由which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是housework，which在定語(yǔ)從句中作動(dòng)詞done的賓語(yǔ)．

解答 Dear parents，
Now I know clearly that you both are expecting me anxiously．I can say nothing but thanks to you both on this special occasion，becausewords have failed me when I want to express my thanks to you both for theloving care you have shown for me，【高分句型】especially since I went to Senior Three．（感恩父母）These days I have been studying hard and have made someprogress．And everything has got along well with my college entranceexamination．I will perform my ability in the future exam．I hope you both canset your mind at rest．（匯報(bào)學(xué)習(xí)情況）
After the exam，I intend to help you do some housework whichI have seldom done before．And I also mean to learn to cook for you both inperson．【高分句型】（高考后的打算）
My dear parents，everything is going on well with me and dohave a rest!
Best wishes！
Yours，
LI Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．