Question

“目標”在人們成長的路上發(fā)揮著重要的作用，在高二尤為重要。請你結合自身實際，按以下提示，準備一篇英語發(fā)言稿，在英語課上與同學們作交流。

1. 目標的重要性；

2. 如何設立目標；

3. 談談你的近期目標；

4. 如何實現(xiàn)你的目標。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)150左右，開頭語已為你寫好；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear classmates,

It's a great honor to have a chance to speak here. Today I'd like to share my thought about goals with you.

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Wish you to realize your dreams.

That's all.Thank you!

 

Answer 1

Dear classmates,

It's a great honor to have a chance to speak here.Today I'd like to share my thought about goals with you.

There is no denying that goals are important especially for senior students because they act as maps guiding you to where you are heading for.With a clear direction, you will directly get what you want.

In my view, goals are not difficult to set. First, you should make clear what you really want. What's more, it's essential to make detailed plans which can be carried out step by step. My short-term aim is to perform wonderfully in the coming exam so that I can step into an ideal university to fulfill my dream.

To achieve this, not only will I spare no effort and make full use of every minute to be prepared, but also I will keep a positive attitude towards ups and downs in life.

Wish you to realize your dreams.

That's all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求以“目標”為側重點并結合自身的實際情況寫一篇發(fā)言稿。寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，主要從目標的重要性、如何設立目標、你的近期目標、如何實現(xiàn)目標這幾個方面入手，寫作時注意行文的連貫性；不能出現(xiàn)拼寫和標點錯誤；盡量使用學過的定語從句、名詞性從句、非謂語動詞、特殊句式等語法知識和高級詞匯，來增加作文的亮點。

亮點說明：范文主要分為三段，第一段寫目標的重要性，第二段寫設立目標和自己的近期目標，第三段寫如何實現(xiàn)目標。

范文使用了固定句型There is no denying that goals are important especially for senior students；原因狀語從句because they act as maps guiding you to...；賓語從句where you are heading for，what you want，what you really want；定語從句which can be carried out step by step；目的狀語從句so that I can step into an ideal university；倒裝not only will I spare no effort等重難點語法知識，英語知識掌握得很扎實；

范文注意使用In my view, First, What's more, To achieve this等詞和短語來銜接前后句和上下文，使作文銜接緊湊，條理清晰；

范文還使用了directly；essential；step into；fulfill；positive；act as；head for；step by step；not only..., but also...；spare no effort；make full use of；keep a positive attitude towards；ups and downs等高級詞匯和固定短語，使作文的內(nèi)容得到了充實。

考點：書信類作文