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書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
最近，很多中學(xué)生都紛紛開起了自己的博客。一方面，博客可以作為展示自己的窗口，可以釋放學(xué)習(xí)的壓力，因此已經(jīng)被越來越多的中學(xué)生所接受。但是，另一方面，很多家長和老師都認(rèn)為管理個人博客要花相當(dāng)多的時間和精力，會耽誤學(xué)習(xí)。請對這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡要介紹，并發(fā)表自己的看法。   
注意：1．詞數(shù)：l00左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．參考詞匯：開博客open one’s blog。
Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet.
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Answer 1

Nowdays ,there is a phenomenon that more and more high school students open thire own blogs on the Internet .For one thing ,it can provide a colorful platform to shoucase thire talent ,and it is a way to release thire pressure ,and all this makes it more and more popular with high school students.But many parents and teachers hold a different view ,they think that managing one’s blog will take a lot of time and energy,while this should be used to study which is thire main responsibility .
In my opinion ,I do opprove of this activity.Opening and organizing an eye catching blog needs various abilities such as writing, designing, being skilful at computer and so on. Only if we master those abilities can we make a successful blog. As a consequence, we improve ourselves during the procedures of organizing our blogs.
Blog itself is of little harm. It is your attitude towards it that matters. We should take the advantages and avoid some bad effects.

解析試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是對學(xué)生開博客的不同觀點(diǎn)，題目給出了大部分要點(diǎn)，也要考生給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是一些同學(xué)反對的觀點(diǎn)，然后是贊同的觀點(diǎn)，最后是自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求考生用地道的英語表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求觀點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫作的時候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來，使文章成為一個整體。
考點(diǎn)：考查正反方觀點(diǎn)作文寫作
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于正反方觀點(diǎn)作文，但是要點(diǎn)給出的比較全，只需要考生表達(dá)清楚，還有自己的觀點(diǎn)。在寫作的時候要適合合適的連接詞來連接各要點(diǎn)，使他們成為整體。要選擇高級的詞匯和句型，讓文章有變化，有層次。