【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文

中共有 10 處錯(cuò)誤，每句最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改 10 處，多者（從第 11 處起）不計(jì)分。

My senior high school life started with military training(軍訓(xùn)). It consisted in two parts: the theory exam and the physical training, which was lasted about two weeks. The latter was much tough than the former. Dressed in green uniforms and exposing to the sun, we had to follow the soldier daily routine and go through hard training. Each morning, we had to get up and fold quilts rapid. We should finish our meals in limited time, too. Then I think it unbearable. Besides, now looking back, I find it necessary. It is the military training which teaches me how to bear hardship and lead better life.

【答案】1. in→ of 2.去掉which后的was 3.tough→ tougher 4.exposing→exposed 5.soldier→soldiers’ 或soldier’s 6.rapid→rapidly 7.think→thought 8.Besides→However 9.which→that 10. lead后加a

【解析】

本文是記敘文，講述了作者在高中時(shí)期的第一次軍訓(xùn)的經(jīng)歷。

1.考查固定短語。句意：它包括兩個(gè)部分。短語 consist of“由…組成”。故in改為of。

2.考查語態(tài)。句意：它包括兩個(gè)部分：理論考試和體能訓(xùn)練，持續(xù)了大約兩周。which引導(dǎo)的定語從句先行詞是it, 指military training，和last之間邏輯上為主動(dòng)關(guān)系，不用被動(dòng)。故去掉which后的was。

3.考查形容詞比較等級(jí)。than常和比較級(jí)連用；“much+比較級(jí)”意思為“…得多”。故.tough改為tougher。

4.考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。句意：穿著綠色制服，暴露在陽光下，我們不得不遵循士兵的日常生活，經(jīng)歷艱苦的訓(xùn)練。短語be exposed to “暴露在…中”；expose和主句主語 we之間的邏輯關(guān)系可理解為we were exposed to …，因此用過去分詞作狀語。故exposing改為exposed。

5.考查名詞所有格。句意：穿著綠色制服，暴露在陽光下，我們不得不遵循士兵的日常生活，經(jīng)歷艱苦的訓(xùn)練。根據(jù)句意，此處應(yīng)該為“士兵的日常生活”，應(yīng)該用名詞的所有格形式，表示所屬關(guān)系，意為“…的”；可以用soldier的單數(shù)，表達(dá)為soldier’s；也可以用soldier的復(fù)數(shù)，表達(dá)為soldiers’。故soldier改為soldier’s或soldiers’ 。

6.考查副詞。修飾動(dòng)詞fold quilts，應(yīng)用副詞形式。故rapid改為rapidly。

7.考查時(shí)態(tài)。文章敘述的是過去的事情,用一般過去時(shí)；think是不規(guī)則變化動(dòng)詞，過去式為thought。故think改為thought。

8.考查連詞。前一句說“我覺得難以忍受”，后一句說“現(xiàn)在我覺得是有必要的”，兩個(gè)句子之間是轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)系；besides意思為“而且”，表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系；應(yīng)用however表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，意思為“然而”。故Besides改為However。

9.考查強(qiáng)調(diào)句型。句意：正是這次軍訓(xùn)教會(huì)了我如何吃苦，過上更好的生活。強(qiáng)調(diào)句型結(jié)構(gòu)為“It is +被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+who/ that…”；此句中強(qiáng)調(diào)主語the military training，指物，用that。

故which改為that。

10.考查固定短語。短語lead a …life “過著…...的生活”，故lead后加a 。

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