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20．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之問(wèn)交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉．修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．注意：（1）每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；（2）只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones．So nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead of．This change in communication have good effects on our works and life．Comparing with letters and public phones，mobile phones and the Internet are fast and much more convenient．If you missed your grandmother，you just take out your phone and say"hello"to him．And she will be happy to hear your voice．If you want to place order with a foreign company，you can e-mail the message．It'll be minutes after you get their reply．

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分析 文章指出過(guò)去用書(shū)信交往，現(xiàn)在使用手機(jī)和互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，并分析了后者的優(yōu)點(diǎn)．

解答 People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones．So nowadays
 they use mobile phones and the Internet instead of．This change in communication have good 
 effects on our works and life．Comparing with letters and public phones，mobi le phones and the 
  Internet are fast and much more convenient．If you missed your grandmother，you just take out
your phone and say"hello"to him．And she will be happy to hear your voice．If you want to place∧order 
with a foreign company，you can e-mail the message．It'll be minutes after you get their reply．
                                                      
1．so改為but  考查連接詞．根據(jù)句意可知，此處是表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，所以用but．
2．去掉of 考查介詞．句意是相反，現(xiàn)在的人們使用手機(jī)和互聯(lián)網(wǎng)來(lái)代替書(shū)信，instead此處是副詞．
3．have改為has 考查謂語(yǔ)．句子的主語(yǔ)是This change，所以謂語(yǔ)需用單數(shù)形式．
4．works改為work 考查名詞．此處work為工作，不可數(shù)名詞．
5．comparing改為compared 考查非謂語(yǔ)．compared with…為固定表達(dá)，與…做比較．
6．fast改為faster 考查比較級(jí)．根據(jù)句意可知，手機(jī)和互聯(lián)網(wǎng)與書(shū)信做比較，故使用比較級(jí)．
7．missed改為miss 考查時(shí)態(tài)．?dāng)⑹龅氖且环N現(xiàn)在的情況，故使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
8．him改為her 考查代詞．前面提到的grandmother，故使用her代指．
9．在order前加an 考查冠詞．order此處是名詞，訂單，可數(shù)名詞．
10．a(chǎn)fter改為 before 考查連接詞．It'll be minutes before是固定句型，"過(guò)不了多久就…"．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 整體把握短文大意，弄清短文的基本時(shí)態(tài)，分析句子之間的結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系，結(jié)合上下文語(yǔ)境運(yùn)用詞匯，語(yǔ)法等基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)找出文中的錯(cuò)誤并加以修改．