Question

1．假設(shè)你是李華，正在英國學(xué)習(xí)，想?yún)⒓訉W(xué)校的一個"中西文化交流俱樂部"，你希望成為其中的一員．請根據(jù)下列要點用英文給組織者寫一封申請信：
1．個人情況：年齡，性別；
2．個人條件：英語水平，對西方文化感興趣，善于與人交流；
3．目的：結(jié)交朋友，了解更多中西文化之間的差異．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear sir/madam，
My name is Li Hua and I'm 17 years old．I am interested in joining the Chinese and Western Cultural Communication Club．
I do well in English reading and can speak English fluently．What's more，I'm very interested in Western culture，especially literature and painting．In addition，I've read many great works by famous writers，such as gone with the Wind and Jane Eyre．To be frank，I'm good at communicating and expressing myself．
By joining the club，I hope I can make friends with people from all over the world so that we can exchange our cultural experiences．I'd like to know more about the differences between Chinese and Western traditions and history．
I hope to admitted to the club and look forward to hearing from you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
In addition，I've read many great works by famous writers，such as gone with the Wind and Jane Eyre
此外，我讀過很多由著名作家寫的偉大的作品，如飄和Jane Eyre．
高分句型二：
By joining the club，I hope I can make friends with people from all over the world so that we can exchange our cultural experiences．
通過加入俱樂部，我希望能和來自世界各地的人交朋友，這樣我們就可以交流我們的文化經(jīng)驗．

解答 Dear sir/madam，
My name is Li Hua and I'm 17 years old．I am interested in joining the Chinese and Western Cultural Communication Club．
I do well in English reading and can speak English fluently．What's more，I'm very interested in Western culture，especially literature and painting．In addition，I've read many great works by famous writers，such as gone with the Wind and Jane Eyre（高分句型一）．To be frank，I'm good at communicating and expressing myself．
By joining the club，I hope I can make friends with people from all over the world so that we can exchange our cultural experiences（高分句型二）．I'd like to know more about the differences between Chinese and Western traditions and history．
I hope to admitted to the club and look forward to hearing from you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．