3．Smoking is widespread phenomenon even among teenage students．The number of young smokers are increasing．It is estimated that over 10% of the senior high school students had tried smoking once or more．Some of them even steal money from their parents to buy cigarettes，that is terrible．
As it is known to all，smoking is harmful to health．And it's even more harmful to teenage students for it does greatly harm not only to their health but also their mind．
Teenage students are future builder of the country．They should spend their time learn what is useful but keep a healthy lifestyle as well．So it's high time that teenage smokers make up their minds to give up smoking．

分析 本文主要介紹抽煙在青少年學(xué)生中一個(gè)普遍的現(xiàn)象．作者認(rèn)為抽煙對健康有害，青少年學(xué)生是祖國的未來，應(yīng)當(dāng)花時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)有用的事情且保持健康的生活方式．因此，該是青少年抽煙者放棄抽煙的時(shí)候了．

解答 Smoking is∧widespread phenomenon even among teenage students．The number of young smokers are increasing．It is estimated that over 10% of the senior high school students had tried smoking once or more．Some of them even steal money from their parents to buy cigarettes，that is terrible．
As it is known to all，smoking is harmful to health．And it's even more harmful to teenage students for it does greatly harm not only to their health but also their mind．
Teenage students are future builder of the country．They should spend their time learn what is useful but keep a healthy lifestyle as well．So it's high time that teenage smokers make up their minds to give up smoking．
詳解：
1．加a 考查冠詞．是可數(shù)名詞，單數(shù)形式前加不定冠詞a表示泛指．
2．a(chǎn)re改為is 考查主謂一致．主語number是單數(shù)形式，謂語動(dòng)詞也應(yīng)用單數(shù)形式is．
3．had改為have 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．try對現(xiàn)在造成了結(jié)果或影響，要用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)．
4．that改為which 考查定語從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語從句，先行詞是前面整個(gè)句子，在從句中作主語，用關(guān)系代詞which．
5．去掉it  考查定語從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語從句，先行詞是后面的句子smoking is harmful to health，關(guān)系代詞as作主句的主語，it是多余的，要去掉．
6．greatly改為great 考查形容詞．harm是名詞，要用形容詞修飾．
7．builder改為builders 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．此處表語要與主語一致，要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
8．learn改為learning  考查動(dòng)名詞．spend time/money （in） doing sth．意為"花費(fèi)時(shí)間（金錢）做某事"，其中in可以省略．
9．but改為and  考查連詞．spend與keep是并列謂語，用連詞and．
10 made或should make 考查定語從句．it is （high） time that從句中，that從句中的謂語動(dòng)詞用一般過去時(shí)或should+動(dòng)詞原形．

點(diǎn)評 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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