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4．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞．
     2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第II處起）不計分．
One cold evening during the holiday season，a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window． The little child has no shoes and his clothes were just rags． A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes． She took the child by the hand and led him into the store． There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly clothing．They came back outside into the street，so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday． The little boy looked  her and asked how she was God． She smiled and replied that she was just one of His child．

Answer 1

分析 假日一個寒冷的夜晚，一個大約六七歲的小男孩站在商場的櫥窗前，沒穿鞋子，衣服破破爛爛．經(jīng)過的一位女士看到了孩子蒼白的藍眼睛中的渴望．她帶著小男孩加入商場，給他買了新鞋子和溫暖的衣服．出了商場，這位女士讓小男孩回家，小男孩看著她，問她是否是上帝，女士笑著說她只是上帝的一個孩子．

解答 One cold evening during the holiday season，a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window．
                                                                                                                                          去掉  
The little child hasno shoes and his clothes were just rags．
                      had
A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes．
                        passing 
She took the child by the hand and led him into the store． There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly clothing．
                                                                                                                 him                                                         warm
They came back outside into the street，so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday． 
                                                           and                                         go                                       
The little boy looked∧her and asked how she was God．
                              加at                  if/whether
She smiled and replied that she was just one of his child．
                                                                         children
1．the去掉．短語搭配，in the front of是指內(nèi)部的前部，in front of 是外部的前面．
2．has改為had．文章講述的是過去的故事，要用一般過去時態(tài)．
3．passes改為passing．題干中pass by是作woman的后置定語，要用非謂語動詞形式．兩者構成主動關系，要用現(xiàn)在分詞．
4．her改為him．邏輯指代錯誤，句意指代的是小男孩，要用him來指代．
5．warmly改為warm．題干中是修飾名詞clothing，要用形容詞．
6．so改為and．句意表達的是承接的動作，不是結(jié)果．
7．come改為go．邏輯錯誤，句意表達的是讓小男孩回家去，不是到家來．
8．加at．題干中l(wèi)ook是不及物動詞，后接賓語時，要加介詞．
9．how改為if/whether．題干中she was God是作asked的賓語從句，句意表達的是小男孩問她是不是上帝，不是表達程度．
10．child改為children．題干中前面有one of短語，child要用復數(shù)．

點評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎知識．�？嫉闹�識點有：名詞（單復數(shù)錯誤），動詞（時態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．