Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

Marmi, my big sister, was eagerly looking for a pup(小狗) to look after and love all her life, so she would ask Mummy many times for a pup of her own, but the answer was always no. You see, my mum is not very fond of dogs, never has been, and always says they're too big a responsibility. She's just not a dog person. Well, that didn't stop my sister from looking or hoping for a dog. She used to search online for her favourite breed(品種). Until one day Marni found some Cavapoo pups advertised for sale. She immediately showed Mummy and begged to go and see them. Not sure how my sister persuaded her, but to our surprise, Mummy said we could go and have a look at them but not to get high hopes. Marni rushed everyone in the car before Mummy changed her mind. Off we sped to the advertised breeder's house which luckily wasn't too far. We got to the house and I bet I could hear my sister's heart dancing with excitement. As we rang the doorbell, we could hear cute little barks coming from inside. We went in and saw lots of little black pups excitedly jumping around. There were other people there too, so we needed to choose one fast if you know what I mean. It was rather crowded but the breeder let us hold and cuddle(摟抱) the pups. The breeder handed a little confident pup to Marni. The little pup seemed an old friend with my sister. But after a lot of cuddles, Mummy said we had to go and would have to think about it.

注意:

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;

2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好;

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Paragraph 1:

As we were walking towards the door, the little pup followed my sister out.

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Paragraph 2:

The little pup made a mess(雜亂) of our home.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

As we were walking towards the door, the little pup followed my sister out. The moment when she just wanted to get on the car , the pup ran to her and swayed her tail. She kept licking Marmi as if to beg her to take her home. After Marmi persuaded Mummy again and again Mummy obliged to raise her . She immediately curled at my sister’s feet, gazing at everyone. Mummy told Marmi care and love are responsibilities.

Paragraph 2:

The little pup made a mess(雜亂) of our home. Each blanket had been damaged and the corner of our pillows had a jagged hole. Things became complicated. Mummy called the breeder and told him she had changed her mind . On hearing that Marmi was sad and she promised Mummy she would train her . As Marmi followed the instructions the breeder gave, the pup made strides in the months.Shenolongertriedtogetonthebed,butshedidlikesittinginthefoldingchairs.Sincethen,shehadbecomeafriendofourfamily. We were animal lovers.(175 words)

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫。根據(jù)所給閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，在所給材料后續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

通過閱讀所給文章可知，作者的姐姐非常期待養(yǎng)一只狗，但媽媽是個(gè)不喜歡狗的人，以養(yǎng)狗責(zé)任大為借口不同意。姐姐并沒有放棄，終于在網(wǎng)上找到了售賣狗的廣告，在她的祈求和說明下，媽媽同意去賣狗的地方看看，他們一家來到了賣狗的地方，姐姐興奮地抱著狗，一條又一條，最后媽媽還是猶豫了，要回去再想想才能決定。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，都給了開頭，這就要求寫作要符合開頭的語境，要符合故事發(fā)展的邏輯，對考生也是挑戰(zhàn)。

第一段可以寫他們要離開時(shí)，小狗的反應(yīng)，小狗對姐姐的依戀，祈求姐姐收養(yǎng)它，在姐姐的再三請求下，媽媽終于答應(yīng)帶狗狗回家。第二段可以寫狗狗回家后，開始時(shí)由于沒有受過訓(xùn)練，給家庭帶來了一系列麻煩，情況變得復(fù)雜了，媽媽想改變主意送回小狗，姐姐決心訓(xùn)練小狗，讓它適應(yīng)家庭生活。在姐姐的訓(xùn)練下，小狗成為了家庭的一員。