Question

18．假定你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席李津，你校將于8月3日-5日在天津海河舉行迎全運(yùn)會(huì)（the National Games）龍舟比賽（Dragon Boat Race）請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給姐妹學(xué)校劍橋中學(xué)（Cambridge High School）寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)信．
1．寫(xiě)信的目的；
2．活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、意義；
3．回復(fù)：2017年7月20號(hào)之前．
注意：
1.100詞左右；
2．可以增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)己為你寫(xiě)好．
Dear Sir or  Madam，
I'm Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union．In order to meet the coming National Games in TianJin，a Dragon Boat Race will be held by our school．On behalf of our school，I sincerely invite you to take part in it．
The Dragon Boat Race is scheduled to start on Aug 3^rd and last for 3 days．It is to be held in the Haihe river，where audience along the river can have a perfect view of the competition．It is through the race that students can not only feel the charm of the traditional custom but also gain a further understanding of the strength of unity．At the same time，it's a valuable chance to improve the communication between two schools．
We believe this activity will become a part of the most unforgettable experience of students．So we hope you will come please inform us your decision before 20^th July so that we can make more detailed arrangements in advance．
Yours
LiJin．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封邀請(qǐng)信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般將來(lái)時(shí)（表示活動(dòng)的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)）一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)（活動(dòng)的意義）．內(nèi)容包括：一自我介紹以及寫(xiě)信的目的；二活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和意義；三回復(fù)要在2017年7月20號(hào)之前．
高分句型：
1．It is to be held in the Haihe river，where audience along the river can have a perfect view of the competition．句子里is to 表示"將來(lái)時(shí)"；where引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是 the Haihe river；have a perfect view of 表示"很好的觀看到"．
這次的龍舟比賽將會(huì)在淮河里舉行，觀眾沿著河岸可以很好的觀看到這場(chǎng)比賽．
2．It is through the race that students can not only feel the charm of the traditional custom but also gain a further understanding of the strength of unity．句子里It is…that 構(gòu)成強(qiáng)調(diào)句式，強(qiáng)調(diào)狀語(yǔ)through the race；not only…but also 是并列結(jié)構(gòu)，連接兩個(gè)并列的謂語(yǔ)．
通過(guò)這樣的比賽，學(xué)生們不僅能夠體驗(yàn)到傳統(tǒng)文化的魅力，而且對(duì)于團(tuán)結(jié)的力量會(huì)有更進(jìn)一步理解．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
     I'm LiHua，chairman of the Student Union．In order to meet the coming National Games in TianJin，a Dragon Boat Race will be held by our school．On behalf of our school，I sincerely invite you to take part in it．（自我介紹以及寫(xiě)信的目的）
      The Dragon Boat Race is scheduled to start on Aug 3^rd and last for 3 days．It is to be held in the Haihe river，where audience along the river can have a perfect view of the competition．【高分句型一】It is through the race that students can not only feel the charm of the traditional custom but also gain a further understanding of the strength of unity．【高分句型二】At the same time，it's a valuable chance to improve the communication between two schools．（活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和意義）
       We believe this activity will become a part of the most unforgettable experience of students．So we hope you will come．Please inform us your decision before 20^th July so that we can make more detailed arrangements in advance．（回復(fù)要在2017年7月20號(hào)之前）
                                                                                                                              Yours
                                                                                                                              LiJin

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