Question

4．假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom 幾天前給你發(fā)來電子郵件，詢問你的寒假生活情況，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回一封郵件：
1．感謝Tom 的來信；
2．假期生活總體情況介紹；
3．假期中最大的收獲和遺憾．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120-150；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于開放類的書信作文．文中要點(diǎn)只提到了大體的提綱，并沒有具體的內(nèi)容，考生可靈活發(fā)揮想象來完成作文，只要符合其中的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)即可：感謝來信；假期生活總體情況及收獲和遺憾．審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般過去時(shí)，人稱主要用第一人稱．
重要短語：
did sb good both mentally and physically對(duì)某人身心健康都有益；be busy doing sth忙于做某事；give sth a thorough cleaning徹底打掃…；pay a visit to參觀某地；benefit sb from sth使某人從…中受益．
高分句型：
1．Short as it was，the winter vacation did me some good both mentally and physically．本句為as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句用的倒裝用法，其中本句中倒裝的是表語short．
2．I felt very happy to see the smile on their faces when we sang and told jokes．這是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
3．What benefitted me most from the vacation is that I had a really good rest．本句中的主語為what引導(dǎo)的主語從句，后面的that引導(dǎo)的是一個(gè)表語從句．

解答 Dear Tom，
  I'm writing to tell you something about how I enjoyed my winter vacation．（寫信目的）
   Short as it was，the winter vacation did me some good both mentally and physically．（高分句型）On the first few days，I was busy giving our flat a thorough cleaning to welcome the Spring Festival．I also paid a visit to the nearby nursing home with my classmates．I felt very happy to see the smile on their faces when we sang and told jokes．（高分句型）I also went on a trip along with my parents to Hainan．We had great fun appreciating the sunset there．（假期活動(dòng)）
   What benefitted me most from the vacation is that I had a really good rest．（高分句型）What regrets most was that I did not work hard at my lessons before．Now I'm going all out for the coming entrance exam．（個(gè)人感受）
  What about your winter vacation？I'm looking forward to your early reply．
  Yours
  Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)．考生注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比較流暢．動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作練習(xí)以外，還可以適當(dāng)背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．