Question

2．假如你是李華．你的兩位朋友Tom與Peter幾天前發(fā)生了爭吵．3月9日是Peter生日，Tom想送他一個(gè)禮物來緩和關(guān)系，修復(fù)友情，特地發(fā)來郵件尋求你的建議．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Tom回一封郵件：
1．禮物選擇：
2．你的理由；
3．其它和解建議．
注意：
  1．詞數(shù)100左右：
  2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫：
3．開頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter．
                                                                                      
Best wishes，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給Tom寫一封郵件，告知他該怎樣為前幾天和自己發(fā)生過爭吵的朋友Peter送生日禮物的建議．寫作要點(diǎn)：1．禮物選擇；2．你的理由；3．其它的和解建議．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱和第二人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
重要短語：consider doing sth （考慮做某事），make up with sb（和好），as far as I know（就問所知道的而言），be in poor health （身體差），take more exercise（鍛煉），build up one's body（增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)），in the meanwhile（同時(shí)），be helpful to （對(duì)…有助），environmentally-friendly （環(huán)保的），It's convenient for sb to do （對(duì)…來說是方便的），apart from（除…還），adopt sth（采用…）．

【高分句型】
1．you can often go outing by bike together，which is helpful to rebuild your friendship．
這里是由which引導(dǎo)的非現(xiàn)在性定語從句，which在定語從句中作主語，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．
2．taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport．
這里是動(dòng)名詞taking作主語，句子的謂語動(dòng)詞為is，表語為an environmentally-friendly means of transport．謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)．
3．No matter what you do，being sincere is the most important．
這里是No matter what引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句，也可以轉(zhuǎn)換為whatever you do，主句為being sincere is the most important．

解答 Dear Tom，
I'm glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter．If I were you，I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him．【高分句型】
As far as I know，Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exerciseby riding a bike to build up his body．In the meanwhile，you can often go outing by bike together，which is helpful to rebuildyour friendship．【高分句型】Besides，taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport．【高分句型】It's convenient for him to get around as well．
Apart from giving him a gift，you can also adopt other means，such as travelling，seeing a movie，having dinner and going shopping．No matter what you do，being sincere is the mostimportant．【高分句型】I really hope that we can be good friends forever．
Best wishes，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．