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20．距離高考剩下不到100天的時間了，緊張的備考已經(jīng)拉開序幕，但是很多同學還不知如何處理學習、健身、休息與高考備考之間的關系．請根據(jù)這一話題寫一篇英語短文，談一談你對這一問題的看法和建議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)120字左右，開頭語已為你寫好；    
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams
   The College Entrance Examination is drawing near．_______________________________
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Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．要求根據(jù)所提供的材料，寫出一篇短文，談一談在距高考剩下不到100天的緊張備考的階段如何處理學習、健身、休息與高考備考之間的看法和建議．要點包括：目前學生的做法；給出建議；你的想法．
寫作時應以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主．
重要短語：connect …with…（把…和…結合起來），sacrifice sth （犧牲某事），resultsin （導致），be aware that （意識到…），in order to （為了…），get high scores （得高分），makepreparations for （做充分準備），relieve stress （緩解壓力），by means of （通過…方式），in conclusion（總之）．
【高分句型】
1．In their eyes they should sacrifice their rest time in order to get high scores，which results in poor health and low efficiency of learning．
這里是由which引導的非限制性定語從句，逗號之前是主句，which在從句中作主句，指代前面整個主句的內(nèi)容．
2．Just as a famous saying goes：all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．
這里運用了諺語，意為"只工作不玩，聰明的孩子也會變傻"．
3．We should be aware that nothing is more valuable than health which is a foundation of success．
這里是由否定詞‘nothing'與比較級‘more valuable'連用表示最高級的含義，意為"我們的身體是最重要的"．句子含有which引導的定語從句，先行詞為health，which在從句中作主語，指代health．
4．only when we have adequate rest and do some sports can we study more efficiently．
這里用了部分倒裝，結構為"Only+when+從句狀語成分+一般疑問句形式"．

解答 How to Get Prepared for theCollege Entrance Examination
The College Entrance Examination is drawing near． However，most students of senior three don't know how to connect rest，doing exercisewith study．In their eyes they should sacrifice their rest time in order to gethigh scores，which results in poor health and low efficiency of learning．【高分句型】（目前學生的做法）
Just as a famous saying goes：all work and no play makes Jack adull boy．【高分句型】Weshould be aware that nothing is more valuable than health which is a foundationof success．【高分句型】Therefore，on the one hand，we should make preparations for the exam fully andsystematically．On the other hand，we should relieve stress by means ofrelaxation and doing sports．（建議）
In conclusion，only when we have adequate rest and do some sportscan we study more efficiently．【高分句型】（看法）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．