Question

19．假定你是李華，因陪母親看病，不能參加明天下午關(guān)于美國(guó)文化的講座．請(qǐng)寫一封短信向老師Miss Clinton請(qǐng)假．
內(nèi)容主要包括：
1．不能聽講座，跟老師表示歉意；
2．向老師陳述缺席理由；
3．詢問老師是否有講座錄音或影像，以便日后補(bǔ)聽講座．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．開頭語已為你寫好．
Dear Miss Clinton，
I am very sorry thatI will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon，which is onAmerican culture．
My mother isill，and I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a businesstrip．I will take care of my mother until she is better，so I have to ask forseveral days'leave．
I am veryinterested in the topic of American culture．It is nearly a pity that I missit．I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture．If so，I can listento it when it is convenient．
Thank you verymuch．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是書信類作文，根據(jù)所提供的材料，寫一封電子郵件向老師Miss Clinton 請(qǐng)假，也屬提綱作文．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：不能聽講座，跟老師表示歉意；向老師陳述缺席理由；詢問老師是否有講座錄音或影像，以便日后補(bǔ)聽講座．寫作時(shí)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主．重要短語：be able to do sth  （在校門口），attend the lecture （前往某處），on a business trip（出差旅行），be very interested in…（很感興趣…），ask for several days'leave（請(qǐng)幾天假），when it is convenient（當(dāng)方便的時(shí)候）．

解答 Dear Miss Clinton，
I am very sorrythat I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon，which is onAmerican culture．【高分句型】（因不聽講座，跟老師表示歉意）
My mother isill，and I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a businesstrip．I will take care of my mother until she is better，so I have to ask forseveral days'leave．【高分句型】（向老師陳述缺席的理由）
I am veryinterested in the topic of American culture．It is nearly a pity that I missit．I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture．If so，I can listento it when it is convenient．（詢問老師是否有講座錄音或影像，以便日后補(bǔ)聽講座）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．