【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作

文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

As the New Year’s day was coming, my classmates and I decided to do something specially to give our motherland a new-year gift. After a heating discussion, we agreed on carrying out a flash mob singing the song Me and My Motherland at Guangzhou Railway Station. Early that day, they arrived at the station. After setting up the equipments, I took deep breath and began to sing. Meanwhile, my classmates walked towards me from different directions but sang together. Soon the atmosphere gets warmed up. More and more passers-by slowed down and joined in us happily, wave national flags. All the people sang high praise for which we had done.

【答案】1. specially → special

2. heating → heated

3. they → we

4. equipments → equipment

5. deep前加a

6. but → and

7. gets → got

8. 刪除join后的in

9. wave → waving

10. which → what

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述了作者和同學(xué)用在車(chē)站唱“我和我的祖國(guó)”的方式為祖國(guó)獻(xiàn)上新年禮物。在他們的影響下，越來(lái)越多的過(guò)路人加入到他們的行列。

1. 考查形容詞。分析句子可知，此處應(yīng)用形容詞作為不定代詞something的后置定語(yǔ)，故將specially改為special。

2. 考查形容詞。此處考查形容詞heated“熱烈的”，a heated discussion“一次熱烈的討論”，故將heating改為heated。

3. 考查代詞。句意：那天一大早，我們就到了火車(chē)站。結(jié)合上下文可知，此處用we“我們”符合語(yǔ)境，故將they改為we。

4. 考查名詞的數(shù)。equipment“設(shè)備”是不可數(shù)名詞，沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將equipments改為equipment。

5. 考查冠詞。此處考查固定短語(yǔ)take a deep breath“深呼吸”，故在deep前加a。

6. 考查并列連詞。句意：與此同時(shí)，我的同學(xué)一邊唱著歌一邊從各個(gè)方向朝我走來(lái)。根據(jù)句意可知，此處是順承關(guān)系，應(yīng)用并列連詞and，故將but改為and。

7. 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本篇講述過(guò)去的事情，應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故將gets改為got。

8. 考查介詞。此處考查固定搭配join sb“加入某人的行列”，故刪除join后的in。

9. 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。分析句子可知，此處應(yīng)用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)，邏輯主語(yǔ)passers-by和wave之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞，故將wave改為waving。

10. 考查賓語(yǔ)從句。分析句子可知，此處是賓語(yǔ)從句連接詞，從句we had done缺少賓語(yǔ)，且指代事物，應(yīng)用連接代詞what，故將which改為what。

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