Question

【題目】假定你是李華，計(jì)劃寒假找份兼職工作。下面的招聘廣告引起了你的注意，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信。

注意：1）詞數(shù)100左右；
2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫；
3）開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's winter camp.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Dear Mr. Smith,

I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's winter camp. I'm very interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job.

To begin with, I gain much experience of working with children from my part-time job as a babysitter. Besides, I have been a helpful assistant for both my English teacher and my classmates. More importantly, I can speak English fluently, which will help me work with native teachers from England. I will be available for the work on evenings and weekends and can start working from the end of this term. I would really appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】考查應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。要求以李華的身份寫(xiě)一份申請(qǐng)信。所以本文使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；本文對(duì)學(xué)生的要求較高，首先要讀懂原文要求：招聘助理教師，要求能夠在冬天參加工作，和來(lái)自英國(guó)的老師一起工作，課堂上只能講英語(yǔ)，每天晚上工作。要點(diǎn)：1.知悉對(duì)方要招聘助理教師，對(duì)此職位很感興趣并認(rèn)為自己有資格能勝任這一工作。2.做過(guò)班長(zhǎng)，英語(yǔ)流利，這有助于和外籍教師交流；晚上和周末有空閑時(shí)間做兼職工作；3.希望得到對(duì)方的回復(fù)。本文同時(shí)屬于應(yīng)用文，要注意書(shū)信的格式和串聯(lián)語(yǔ)。建議文章使用多樣化的句式，讓句式富有變化，不死板。