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10．假如你是LiHua，發(fā)現(xiàn)一名叫Peter的網(wǎng)友在網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖（post）征集關(guān)于未來(lái)衣服的想法；你對(duì)此非常感興趣，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封郵件，回復(fù)該網(wǎng)友．內(nèi)容包括：對(duì)未來(lái)衣服的猜想，并簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明其功能．注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）=2．參考詞匯：多功能的multifunctional；布料material；溫度temperature；濕度humidity；香味fragrance
Dear Peter，
I have read your post and I am quite interested in itNow I'm putting forward my idea about clothes suitable for people to wear in the future．
The clothes should look cool and multifunctional．They are made from special high-tech materials，which can make them easy to wash．Besides，the clothes'temperature and humidity can agree with the changing environment．In this way，people can feel cool in summer and warm in winter．What's more，magic is that they can even change the color into whatever you like．Last but not least，they can play music and produce a pleasantfragrance
to help people work and sleep more soundly．I strongly believe that this new kind of clothes will be popular in the future．
I hope you like my idea．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇未來(lái)衣服的設(shè)想的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點(diǎn)明書(shū)信目的；二介紹對(duì)未來(lái)衣服的猜想及其功能．高分句型：1．They are made from special high-tech materials，which can make them easy to wash．句子里are made from表示"由…制成"； high-tech materials表示"高科技材料"；which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指主句．他們由高科技材料制成，這使得他們很容易洗滌．2．What's more，magic is that they can even change the color into whatever you like．句子里What's more表示"此外"； that引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句 they can even change the color into whatever you like，沒(méi)有實(shí)際的意思，只是起連接作用； whatever 引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句you like，表示"凡是你喜歡的"．此外，魔力還在于它們可以變成任何你喜歡的顏色．

解答 Dear Peter，
    I have read your post and I am quite interested in it．Now I'm putting forward my idea about clothes suitable for people to wear in the future．（點(diǎn)明書(shū)信目的）
    The clothes should look cool and  multifunctional．They are made from special high-tech materials，which can make them easy to wash．【高分句型一】Besides，the clothes'temperature and humidity can agree with the changing environment．In this way，people can feel cool in summer and warm in winter．What's more，magic is that they can even change the color into whatever you like．【高分句型二】Last but not least，they can play music and produce a pleasant fragrance to help people work and sleep more soundly．I strongly believe that this new kind of clothes will be popular in the future．（介紹對(duì)未來(lái)衣服的猜想及其功能）
   I hope you like my idea．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

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