4．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
The Lantern Festival fell on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month．As early as the Western Han Dynasty，it have become a festival with great significance．
This day's important activity is watch lanterns．Lanterns of various shapes and sizes are hang in the street．"Guessing lantern riddles"are an essential part of the Festival．People will eat yuanxiao on this day，so it is but also called the"Yuanxiao Festival"．Yuanxiao also has other name，tangyuan，that in Chinese has a similar pronunciation with"tuanyuan"．But people eat them，looking forward union，harmony and happiness for the family．

分析 本文主要介紹的元宵節(jié)的歷史及人們?nèi)绾螒c祝元宵節(jié)．早在西漢時(shí)期它就變成了一個(gè)很有意義的節(jié)目．這個(gè)節(jié)目最重要的活動(dòng)是觀燈，有各種形狀和大小的燈籠掛在街上，猜燈謎是其中的一部分．除此之外，人們還吃元宵，期待著家庭團(tuán)園，和諧和幸福．

解答 The Lantern Festival fell on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month．As early as the Western Han Dynasty，it have become a festival with great significance．
This day's important activity is watch lanterns．Lanterns of various shapes and sizes are hang in the street．"Guessing lantern riddles"are an essential part of the Festival．People will eat yuanxiao on this day，so it is but also called the"Yuanxiao Festival"．Yuanxiao also has other name，tangyuan，that in Chinese has a similar pronunciation with"tuanyuan"．But people eat them，looking forward∧union，harmony and happiness for the family．
詳解：
1．fell改為falls 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．此處講述的是一般事實(shí)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，因主語The Lantern Festival是單數(shù)形式，謂語動(dòng)詞也應(yīng)是單數(shù)形式falls．
2．have改為had 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．根據(jù)句中狀語As early as the Western Han Dynasty，要用過去完成時(shí)態(tài)．
3．watch改為watching 考查動(dòng)名詞．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)，be動(dòng)詞后接表語，用動(dòng)名詞短語作表語watching lanterns．
4．hang改為hung 考查動(dòng)詞語態(tài)．Lanterns與hang之間是動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)，其過去分詞是hung．
5．a(chǎn)re改為is 考查主謂一致．動(dòng)名詞短語作主語時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞要用單數(shù)形式is．
6．去掉but 考查副詞．此處表示"也"之意，去掉but．
7．other改為another 考查形容詞．根據(jù)句意："元宵"也有另一個(gè)名字．a(chǎn)nother意為"（人，事物）又一個(gè)的，再一個(gè)的"．
8．that改為which 考查定語從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語從句，先行詞tangyuan在從句中作主語，用關(guān)系代詞which，that不可用于非限制性定語從句中．
9．But改為So 考查連詞．前后兩個(gè)分句之間是因果關(guān)系而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，用連詞so．
10．加to 考查固定搭配．look forward to意為"期望，盼望"．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞．2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分
A city，whether big and small，should be clean．Only when we live in a clean city we live a happy life As we know，a clean city，that disease may be reduced and people's health may be better，are good both for our mind and body．No one believes people lived in a dirty city with waste everywhere can live happy．However，with more and more people moved into our city，it is not easy to keep our city clean．Beside，some factories will pour waste into the air，the river and onto the ground，making it is hard to keep our city clean．To make our city the better place to live in，we still have a lot to do．

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科目：高中英語 來源： 題型：閱讀理解

16．Here is your best chance to travel around the UK in 2012：More than 200 B&Bs（bed & breakfast） across England，Scotland，Wales and Northern Ireland are selected to offer you amazing services for your stay at their lowest prices!Don't miss it．Just collect the vouchers（活動(dòng)券）in our B&B Daily printed from 01/04/012to 07/04/2012and book the stays for your travel following the terms and conditions below：
●The offer includes a room for the night and a breakfast the next morning．
●The offer is of two kinds：￡20 per room，per night，valid（有效的）during stay period of 02/04/2012-31/05/2012and then again 01/09/2012-31/10/2012；￡35per room，per night，valid during stay period of 01/06/2012-31/08/2012．
●The offer is valid for a basic twin or double room only．
●The stay must be booked directly with the chosen B&Bs before 28/04/2012．
●Each voucher can only be used by the holder to book one room for one night．
●If voucher holders book either the￡20or￡35 per room per night，any additional services such as lunch，evening meal or activities may require an extra charge．But these are not required in order to take up the offer．Please check directly with your chosen B&Bs to see what extra services are available．
●Vouchers must be presented on arrival．If no vouchers are presented，the B&Bs may reserve（保留）the right to charge at full price for every night of stay．
●Vouchers may not be used together with any other offer．
●The voucher holders must pay for the stay in full at the time of booking．Additional￡10 may be paid to confirm（確認(rèn)）the booking and will be returned on arrival．
●The B&Bs reserve the right to refuse voucher holders'bookings for people under the age of 18．


21．The voucher can be used for a stay at the chosen B&B onD．
A.09/01/2012              B.04/02/2012
C.01/03/2012              D.28/04/2012
22．How much should be paid for a twonight stay in October 2012at a chosen B&B？B
A．￡70．B．￡40．C．￡35．D．￡30．
23．What right do the B&Bs reserve？B
A．To charge extra￡10 for bookings with no vouchers．
B．To refuse bookings for guests under the age of 18．
C．To charge at full price for stays not confirmed．
D．To request extra charges as tips．

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