Question

【題目】中學生體質(zhì)狀況堪憂，許多學生缺乏運動。為了讓同學們重視運動，你校決定出版一期以“運動與健康”為主題的�？�，請以Benefits of taking regular exercise為題，為�？�撰寫一篇英語短文。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.控制體重；2.精力充沛；3.預防疾��；4.增強自信。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

Benefits of taking regular exercise

For various reasons, many students fail to take regular exercise. In fact, taking regular exercise benefits us a lot.

To begin with, exercise can help us control weight. When we engage in physical activity, we burn lots of calories. Secondly, regular physical activity can improve our muscle strength and endurance, which can keep us energetic. Thirdly, taking part in physical activity regularly can keep us away from a wide range of health problems to some extent. Finally, taking regular exercise makes us confident because we feel much better about ourselves after working out.

Therefore, to feel better, have more energy and keep fit, we should take exercise on a regular basis.

【解析】

試題分析：本次書面表達的主題是學生們應給予足夠重視的：“運動與健康”。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，明確該作文的要點為：1.控制體重；2.精力充沛；3.預防疾��；4.增強自信。2、表達時要重點突出、條理清晰。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本篇范文采用三段式重點突出，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。例如taking regular exercise benefits us a lot.是動名詞作主語。, which can keep us energetic.是非限制性定語從句。還有make的復合結(jié)構(gòu)：makes us confident. 此外，文章還使用了大量短語engage in, keep us away from,to some extent, working out等。而To begin with, Secondly, Thirdly, Finally, 以及Therefore, 的使用使文章內(nèi)容層次感強，也使語言更加連貫。