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8．請(qǐng)閱讀下面材枓，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章．

Bike-sharing has taken off in China far faster than in any other market．The market has become flooded with new companies in recent months．The bike-sharing companies operate in a similar way．They use apps that allow users，after paying a deposit，to unlock the wheels with their smartphones．After the journey，users can leave bikes anywhere in public and pay a little money for the use．The service is very popular as it provides an effective solution to"the last kilometer"problem．

The promoting of the bike-sharing service is also raising questions about profitability，wide-spread bike vandalism （破壞） and theft，and growing government regulation．A Hong Kong man who was arrested for throwing several shared bikes into rivers said he had no regret destroying them because"the GPS devices in the bikes give away users'personal information，such as their locations．"

【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
1．用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；
2．用約120個(gè)單詞發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）支持成反對(duì)共享單車(chē)的推廣；
（2）用2-3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的觀點(diǎn)．
【寫(xiě)作要求】
1．寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
3．不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題．
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇還貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)．
The passage conveys to us the bike-sharing boom across the country，with more companies springing up in the market．The service not only brings great convenience to people，but causes some problems as well．
From my standpoint，bike-sharing system has become an essential part of public transportation in cities and should be actively promoted．Firstly，with an increasing number of people choosing the service to get around，the number of cars on the roads will decrease dramatically，which really helps the environment and reduces traffic jams．Furthermore，this service also benefits individuals in various ways．For example，it provides locals and tourists with a convenient，cheap and healthy means of transport．Those who would otherwise use their own bicycles don't need to be concerned about such problems as theft，storage and maintenance．
In a word，bike sharing is an innovative service，which relieves urban traffic pressure and brings citizens enormous benefits．And more shared bikes should be launched into the market．

Answer 1

分析 寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
The passage conveys to us the bike-sharing boom across the country，with more companies springing up in the market．The service not only brings great convenience to people，but causes some problems as well
這篇文章向我們展示了全國(guó)范圍內(nèi)的自行車(chē)共享熱潮，市場(chǎng)上涌現(xiàn)出更多的公司，這不僅給人們帶來(lái)了極大的便利，而且也帶來(lái)了一些問(wèn)題．
高分句型二：
Firstly，with an increasing number of people choosing the service to get around，the number of cars on the roads will decrease dramatically，which really helps the environment and reduces traffic jams．
首先，隨著越來(lái)越多的人選擇服務(wù)繞過(guò)，道路上的汽車(chē)數(shù)量將大幅減少，這真的有助于環(huán)境和減少交通擁堵．

解答 Possible version one
The passage conveys to us the bike-sharing boom across the country，with more companies springing up in the market．The service not only brings great convenience to people，but causes some problems as well（高分句型一）．
From my standpoint，bike-sharing system has become an essential part of public transportation in cities and should be actively promoted．Firstly，with an increasing number of people choosing the service to get around，the number of cars on the roads will decrease dramatically，which really helps the environment and reduces traffic jams（高分句型二）．Furthermore，this service also benefits individuals in various ways．For example，it provides locals and tourists with a convenient，cheap and healthy means of transport．Those who would otherwise use their own bicycles don't need to be concerned about such problems as theft，storage and maintenance．
In a word，bike sharing is an innovative service，which relieves urban traffic pressure and brings citizens enormous benefits．And more shared bikes should be launched into the market．（163 words）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開(kāi)放性作文給出一定的寫(xiě)作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求