Question

據(jù)調(diào)查，現(xiàn)在不少中學生存在不吃早餐、睡眠不足和缺乏鍛煉等不良生活習慣。請你以Forming healthy habits為題，用英語寫一篇短文，談談你的看法。短文主要包括以下內(nèi)容：

1．摒棄不良習慣，養(yǎng)成健康的習慣的重要性；

2．如何養(yǎng)成健康的習慣：

※吃健康早餐，多吃水果蔬菜；

※充足睡眠，早睡早起；

※經(jīng)常鍛煉。

注意：1.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

2．文章開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)；

3．詞數(shù)：100左右；

4．參考詞匯：維生素vitamin。

Forming healthy habits

A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad living habits，which do great harm to their health.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Forming healthy habits

A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad living habits，which do great harm to their health.

As we all know，health is more important than wealth.Without a healthy body，you cannot do anything even if you are a millionaire. In order to keep healthy，it’s necessary to get rid of unhealthy habits and form good ones.

First of all，eating a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the day.You should eat more fruit and vegetables，which are rich in vitamins.Secondly，get enough sleep.Early to bed and early to rise makes you feel great all day long.Lastly，take exercise every day to make your body strong.

As long as you form healthy habits and keep them，you’ll have a strong body and live a healthy life.

【解析】本文內(nèi)容與考生的日常生活非常接近，考生有話可說。文章主題是養(yǎng)成良好的生活習慣，要點都已經(jīng)給了出來�？忌�需要使用合適的連接詞把各要點連接成完整的文章，如first of all, secondly, lastly等等。同時也要使用一些好的句式如as we all know, 倒裝句，強調(diào)句等。在個人看法部分可以使用一些與健康方面有關的諺語來提升文章的檔次。

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