分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于議論文.寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確有哪些要點(diǎn).2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫,先寫路上汽車越來越多的現(xiàn)象,再分析喜歡喝不喜歡開車的原因. 3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu).比如For those who like driving car,.以及While for the people who don't like driving car,都用了定語從句.Some also think that the car exhausts much carbon dioxide,which has affected the air quality.使用了賓語從句和非限制性定語從句.此外,文章還使用了大量短語 more and more,at one's disposal等,以及副詞especially的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感,也使語言更加連貫.
Now and then,one or two will come into your sight and it seems that the car has become a whole part of people's life,especially for those in large cities.(高分句型一)
For those who like driving car,they think that car can run much faster than bicycles and can save much of their time.(高分句型二)
Some also think that the car exhausts much carbon dioxide,which has affected the air quality.(高分句型三)
解答 Nowadays,there have been more and more cars in streets and people drive it for work,study or for other purposes.Now and then,one or two will come into your sight and it seems that the car has become a whole part of people's life,especially for those in large cities.(高分句型一)However,some people like to drive cars,while others don't.
For those who like driving car,they think that car can run much faster than bicycles and can save much of their time.(高分句型二)Meanwhile,the car is convenient.When you want to go somewhere,you can drive at your di sposal.Moreover,driving fast is exciting.
While for the people who don't like driving car,they think that driving car is very dangerous.There have been more car accidents in recent years.Some also think that the car exhausts much carbon dioxide,which has affected the air quality.(高分句型三)
點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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