Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的外國筆友Sally想利用假期參加一些夏令營活動(dòng)，寫信征求你的意見。請結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，給她回一封郵件，告訴她參加夏令營的好處。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右 (開頭和結(jié)合已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sally,

I'm writing to tell you about my ideas about taking part in various camp activities.

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sally

I'm writing to tell you about my ideas about taking part in various camp activities.

In my opinion, it is beneficial for us. Take myself as an example. I took part in an International English Summer Camp last year. For one thing, I made a lot of friends from different parts of the world, through whom I learned more about different cultures. For another thing, the activities including English corner, English drama plays and the like also changed me a lot. There is no doubt that all these activities can not only help us learn more skills but improve our English.

So, why not join them? Wish you a nice holiday.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封電子郵件。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇是一篇電子郵件：假定你是李華，你的外國筆友Sally想利用假期參加一些夏令營活動(dòng)，寫信征求你的意見。請結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，給她回一封郵件，告訴她參加夏令營的好處。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：taking part in various camp activities.（參加各種各樣的露營活動(dòng)）；beneficial for us（對我們是好的）；International English Summer Camp（國際英語夏令營）；including English corner（包括英語角）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。