Question

17．你校英語外籍教師Mike暑假期間準(zhǔn)備在本地開一家西餐小店，要招若干名高中生為無酬打工人員．下面是招聘啟事：
Wanted!
4 middle school students
Do service work and act as translators
Healthy and helpful
Contact：wfpub@gmail．com
假定你叫李華，愿意應(yīng)聘．請寫封電子郵件，介紹自己，并說明你愿意應(yīng)聘的理由．詞數(shù)100左右．開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mike，
I happened to have read your advertisement and decide to apply for the job．I'm a student of SeniorⅢfrom Wuhan．I've been very interested in English and intend to enter a foreign language college after I graduate from high school．（高分句型一）I shall be free during the summer vocation，so I decide to find something interesting to do and I think that's the very thing I like．（高分句型二）
Though I shall get no pay for the job，I'll be able to get some valuable job experience as well as practise my spoken English by acting as a translator for you．Besides，I'm so strong and healthy，and I really enjoy making friends with others，especially communicating with foreigners．
I'll greatly appreciate it if I'm offered the chance，and I'm sure I can be of great help for you．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你校英語外籍教師Mike暑假期間準(zhǔn)備在本地開一家西餐小店，要招若干名高中生為無酬打工人員，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：愿意應(yīng)聘．，介紹自己，并說明你愿意應(yīng)聘的理由 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be interested in 對…感興趣；intend to do想要做某事；graduate from從…畢業(yè)；as well as 也，和；Besides另外；be of great help 非常有幫助；be able to 能夠做某事；Look forward to盼望；
I've been very interested in English and intend to enter a foreign language college after I graduate from high school．（高分句型一）
I shall be free during the summer vocation，so I decide to find something interesting to do and I think that's the very thing I like．（高分句型二）
I'll greatly appreciate it if I'm offered the chance，and I'm sure I can be of great help for you．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mike，
       I happened to have read your advertisement and decide to apply for the job．I'm a student of SeniorⅢfrom Wuhan．I've been very interested in English and intend to enter a foreign language college after I graduate from high school．（高分句型一）I shall be free during the summer vocation，so I decide to find something interesting to do and I think that's the very thing I like．（高分句型二）
      Though I shall get no pay for the job，I'll be able to get some valuable job experience as well as practise my spoken English by acting as a translator for you．Besides，I'm so strong and healthy，and I really enjoy making friends with others，especially communicating with foreigners．
      I'll greatly appreciate it if I'm offered the chance，and I'm sure I can be of great help for you．（高分句型三）
      Looking forward to your early reply!
                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．