Question

假設(shè)你是李華，一個英國學(xué)生社團下周將到你就讀的啟明中學(xué)進行為期一天的參觀訪問，你負責(zé)接待工作。請根據(jù)下面的提示給對方的負責(zé)人Mr.Steven 寫一封郵件，商討參觀事宜。

1．自我介紹；

2．參觀安排；上午參觀校園；中午食堂用餐；下午交流活動；晚上舉辦歡迎晚會；

3．征詢對方的其它要求。

注意：1．詞數(shù)：120—l50，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Mr．Steven，

I’m Li Hua，a student from Qiming Secondary School．

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Jones,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Qiming Secondary School. I’m in charge of your visit to our school next week and I’m writing to exchange ideas about the arrangements for you.

You’ll be picked up at the airport and after a short rest, we’ll show you around our campus, which will allow you to get a general impression of our school. Then you’re supposed to visit our teaching buildings, the school stadium and the dormitories as well. After that, we will have lunch together in the school canteen. In the afternoon, a free talk will be arranged, so we can talk about the school life and different cultures of the two countries. In the evening, there will be a welcome party for you.

If you have any other request, please inform me in time so that we can make some possible changes to the visiting schedule.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語in charge of負責(zé)；picked up接某人；show you around領(lǐng)某人參觀；we’ll show you around our campus, which will allow you to get a general impression of our school.這個句子which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；In the afternoon, a free talk will be arranged, so we can talk about the school life and different cultures of the two countries.這個句子so連接兩個有因果關(guān)系的句子；

考點： 提綱類作文