【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

At present, I am extreme happy because I am doing what I like. As senior three student, I study hard every day and live it to the full. It feels like good to study hard with my determining classmates to fulfill our dreams. When I recalled the happy things that happened to me, the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped it all. It was a time that my family was going through financial difficulties. So I make up my mind to win the scholarship, hoped to lighten up my parents’ financial burdens. After making tons of painstaking effort, I succeeded. At the ceremony, my mom was the most poorly-dressed woman, and with the brightest smile on her face.

【答案】

【解析】文章主要講述了作者家庭正經(jīng)歷經(jīng)濟(jì)困難，他下定決心努力學(xué)習(xí)，下定決心贏得獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金，減輕父母的經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)。經(jīng)過一番努力，作者成功了，在頒獎(jiǎng)典禮上，雖然母親穿的最寒酸但是但臉上帶著最燦爛的笑容。

第一處：考查副詞。句意：我非常高興，因?yàn)槲以谧鑫蚁矚g做的事情。修飾形容詞happy應(yīng)使用副詞。故將extreme改為extremely。

第二處：考查冠詞。句意：作為一名三年級(jí)的學(xué)生。此處為泛指，as a+n.作為一名……。故在as后填加不定冠詞a。

第三處：考查動(dòng)詞用法。句意：和我堅(jiān)定的同學(xué)們一起努力學(xué)習(xí)來實(shí)現(xiàn)我們的夢想感覺很好。feel like＋名詞/動(dòng)名詞，意為“覺得好像……”；feel為系動(dòng)詞，其后使用形容詞作表語。故將like去掉。

第四處：考查形容詞。表示“決定了的，決定的”用determined，故將determining改為determined。

第五處：考查代詞。句意：我在中學(xué)獲得獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金的經(jīng)歷超過了其他所有快樂的事情。此句表示比較，代詞所指代的內(nèi)容是前面提到的“happy things”，所以代詞應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)，故將it改為them。

第六處：考查定語從句。句意：那時(shí)我的家庭正經(jīng)歷財(cái)務(wù)困難。Time為先行詞，when在從句中作時(shí)間狀語。故將that改為when。

第七處：考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。句意：所以我下定決心要贏得獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金，希望減輕父母的經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)。文章使用一般過去時(shí)描述，故將make改為made。

第八處：考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。句意：所以我下定決心要贏得獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金，希望減輕父母的經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)。主句已經(jīng)有謂語動(dòng)詞，且與前面是逗號(hào)連接，無連詞，I與hope之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故將hoped改為hoping。

第九處：考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。句意：經(jīng)過一番艱苦的努力，我成功了。tons of修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故將effort改為efforts。

第十處：考查連詞。句意：在典禮上，我媽媽是穿得最差的女人，但臉上帶著最燦爛的笑容。前后為并列關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將but改為and。

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