Question

4．假如你是李明，來自美國的交換生Martin 在過去的一個月在你們學校學習生活．現(xiàn)在即將返回美國．請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇歡送詞．
1．贊揚他是一位善良友好，樂于助人的男孩，而且籃球也打得很好；
2．非常懷念和他相處的快樂時光；
3．感謝他對大家的英語學習的幫助；
4．希望他再次有機會來到中國成都，到時一定陪他一起去游覽成都的名勝古跡．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭與結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：名勝古跡 places of interest and historical sites
Dear teachers and friends，
I'd like to say something before Martin goes back to the USA．
．Martin is a very kind，helpful and friendly boy who is good at playing basketball．I feel happy to be his friend．He gets along well with everyone and all of us have a wonderful time with him．Whenever we have trouble learning English，he will never hesitate to help us and our English has been improved a lot since he came to our class．We owe a lot of thanks to Martin．
True friendship never ends，so I hope we can keep in touch with Martin．I also hope that Martin can come back to Chengdu，China．I promise that I will show him around our city and visit the places of interest and historical sites with him．
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇歡送詞．感覺題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明主題；二贊揚Martin的優(yōu)點，懷念和他相處的快樂時光并且感謝他對大家的英語學習的幫助；三希望他再次有機會來到中國成都，到時一定陪他一起去游覽成都的名勝古跡．高分句型：1．Martin is a very kind，helpful and friendly boy who is good at playing basketball．句子里 who引導定語從句 is good at playing basketball，代指先行詞a very kind，helpful and friendly boy．是一位善良友好，樂于助人的男孩，他籃球也打得很好．
2．Whenever we have trouble learning English，he will never hesitate to help us and our English has been improved a lot since he came to our class．句子里Whenever引導讓步狀語從句 we have trouble learning English，表示"無論何時"； hesitate to表示"猶豫去做"；since引導時間狀語從句 he came to our class，表示"自從"．只要我們英語有困難，他總是毫不遲疑的幫助我們．所以自從他來到我們班，我們的英語已經(jīng)被提高了許多．

解答 Dear teachers and friends
     I'd like to say something before Martin goes back to the USA．（點明主題）Martin is a very kind，helpful and friendly boy who is good at playing basketball．【高分句型一】I feel happy to be his friend．He gets along well with everyone and all of us have a wonderful time with him．Whenever we have trouble learning English，he will never hesitate to help us and our English has been improved a lot since he came to our class．【高分句型二】We owe a lot of thanks to Martin．（贊揚Martin的優(yōu)點，懷念和他相處的快樂時光并且感謝他對大家的英語學習的幫助）
    True friendship never ends，so I hope we can keep in touch with Martin．I also hope that Martin can come back to Chengdu，China．I promise that I will show him around our city and visit the places of interest and historical sites with him．（希望他再次有機會來到中國成都，到時一定陪他一起去游覽成都的名勝古跡．）
    That's all．Thank you!

點評 考查提綱類作文．寫作完成以后，要通讀全文，檢查內(nèi)容是否符合要求，要點是否齊全，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否合乎要求．最主要的是要檢查句子是否符合英語習慣，句型是否正確，語法是否正確（包括句子結構、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致等），檢查單詞是否誤寫、少寫，習語搭配是否得當?shù)�，以及字母大小寫、標點符號是否正確等，這就要求考生在定稿認真檢查，仔細核對，及時發(fā)現(xiàn)并改正問題，保證要點齊全，句子完整通順，力爭減少失誤