Question

【題目】微信朋友圈已經(jīng)成為非常受歡迎的社交平臺。最近你班針對“是否父母應(yīng)該被允許看你的微信朋友圈”這一話題開展討論，大家發(fā)表了不同的看法。請根據(jù)下面所給內(nèi)容，反映討論情況并表達自己的觀點。

不同觀點	理由
30%支持	1、青少年缺乏社會經(jīng)驗，需要父母的指導(dǎo)。 2、不允許父母參與，可以使代溝越來越來大，而允許父母參與微信朋友圈可以幫助父母與子女溝通并且使關(guān)系更加親近。
70%反對	1、每個人需要隱私，假如父母允許父母看， 我們將沒有自己的密秘。 2、微信朋友圈是我們和同齡朋友交流平臺，如果允許父母看我們微信圈，我們將無法自由的和朋友由分享我們的想法。
你的觀點	發(fā)表你自己的看法并說明原因。（不少于兩點原因）

注意：1. 詞數(shù)150左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)

2.參考詞匯：微信朋友圈 the Moments of WeChat 參與involvement 隱私 privacy 代溝generation gap

Recently our class held a heated discussion about whether our parents should be allowed to see our Moments of Wechat.

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently our class held a heated discussion about whether our parents should be allowed to see our Moments.

There are 30% of the students who are for it. the reasons are as follows: Firstly, as teenagers, we need our parents’ guidance especially in terms of social experience. Secondly, Without parents’ involvement, the generation gap between our parents and us may tend to become bigger and bigger. Instead, parents’ involvement can lead to better communication and a closer relationship between parents and children.

However, 70% of the students argue against it. For one thing, we hold the view that everyone needs some privacy. If parents are allowed to see our Moments, we won’t have our own secrets. For another thing, the Moments of WeChat is mainly a way of communicating with friends of our own age. If our parents are allowed to see it, we can’t share our thoughts with our friends freely.

In my opinion, it is meaningful to let parents see our Moments, which makes them happy and stops them from worrying about me. Besides, our parents feel like seeing our Moments, which shows their care and love for us.

【解析】試題分析：最近你班針對“是否父母應(yīng)該被允許看你的微信朋友圈”這一話題開展討論，并發(fā)表了不同的看法。根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容，反映討論情況并表達自己的觀點。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來。寫作時注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用，同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】

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