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2．Don't boast，but be proud of what you've done．These two pieces of advice were tough to balance long before Facebook existed，and the share-it-all nature of today's social media world hasn't made it any easier．It's just difficult to draw a line between a modest boast and straight-up boasting．But one thing we know for sure is that oversharing doesn't do your friendships any favors-a new study out of Carnegie Mellon University proves it．
To find out how social sharing impacts our relationships，Professor George Loewenstein and his colleagues surveyed Amazon employees，dividing them into groups：self-promoters and those who received that self-promotion．Both groups told stories about past experiences with boasting，and how it made them feel．The results？When we inform our peers about our good experiences，we tend to predict their reactions incorrectly．So telling your friends about your great new job or early college admission decision might make them proud of you，but not nearly as proud as you might think．On the other hand，even if you know your news might bother your friends，you probably don't know just how much．
So your sharing behavior could easily be considered annoying or even narcissistic（自戀）．
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．用約30個單詞寫出上文概要；
2．用約120個單詞發(fā)表你的觀點，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）舉一到二個例子說明你所經(jīng)歷的社交分享以及它們的影響；
（2）在社交分享中要注意的問題以及方法．
【寫作要求】
1．可以支持文中任一觀點，但必須提供理由或論據(jù)；
2．闡述觀點或提供論據(jù)時，不能直接引用原文語句；
3．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
4．不必寫標題．
【評分標準】
內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
As is illustrated in the passage above，it is crucial to draw a balance between a modest boast and a straight-up boasting because social sharing in different ways will influence our relationships
正如上面的文章所說明的，在適度的吹噓和直接的自夸之間取得平衡是至關(guān)重要的，因為不同方式的社會分享會影響我們的關(guān)系．
高分句型二：
I was very excited to tell my friend that I had won the first prize in the math competition and how proud my parents were at the news，only to be received with a cold smile，saying I was lucky enough．
我告訴我的朋友，我在數(shù)學(xué)競賽中獲得一等獎，多么自豪，我的父母都在消息非常激動，只能收到冷冷一笑，說我很幸運．

解答 One possible version：
As is illustrated in the passage above，it is crucial to draw a balance between a modest boast and a straight-up boasting because social sharing in different ways will influence our relationships（30詞概括）（高分句型一）．
That reminds me of an experience．I was very excited to tell my friend that I had won the first prize in the math competition and how proud my parents were at the news，only to be received with a cold smile，saying I was lucky enough（高分句型二）．Not well prepared for her causal response，I stared at her．Worse still，she was weeping with anger．Seeing her sadness，I regretted having told her my result without taking her feeling into consideration．
In my mind，sharing information in a proper way really counts，neither boasting nor assuming．Too much social sharing will have bad effects on the receivers and the givers，making both embarrassed．Dealt with improperly，social information can be misunderstood easily．Hopefully we will handle it well．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．