Question

在學校組織的“感動校園人物”評選活動中，你班經過討論，決定推薦李華參加評選。請按以下要求寫一篇100-120詞的文章。內容包括：
1．推薦李華的理由；
2．列舉1-2個事例。
注意：文章開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數。
After a heated discussion, our class has decided to recommend Li Hua as the Touching Figure on Campus.
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Answer 1

After a heated discussion, our class has decided to recommend Li Hua as the Touching Figure On Campus.
We have every reason to believe he is qualified for the honour. First, Li Hua is always willing to offer us help whenever necessary. Besides, his great devotion to work as monitor makes our class a best place to study in. However, what has impressed us most is his unconditional love to poor children. Last summer vacation, he volunteered to teach English in a small village, which has inspired many other students to join in and thus helped open up a new world to those children as well.
　　All in all, his selfless love touches our heart and his action suggests that even small efforts can make a difference to those in need. Therefore, we strongly support Li Hua as the Touching Figure On Campus.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式作文：要求寫一篇文章推薦李華參加評選“感動校園人物”，考生首先要認真審題，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。因為只是提綱，所以要根據所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
【亮點說明】We have every reason to believe he is qualified for the honour.這句話用了詞組have every reason to do sth“有理由做…” 和be qualified for“合格”， Li Hua is always willing to offer us help whenever necessary.這句話用了省略句， his great devotion to work as monitor makes our class a best place to study in. 這句話用了不定式做定語，what has impressed us most is his unconditional love to poor children.這句話用了主語從句和表語從句， Last summer vacation, he volunteered to teach English in a small village, which has inspired many other students to join in and thus helped open up a new world to those children as well.這句話用了非限制性定語從句， All in all, his selfless love touches our heart and his action suggests that even small efforts can make a difference to those in need. 這句話用了詞組：make a difference to“對…產生影響”，還有文章還使用了First, Besides, However, Therefore,這樣的關聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。