Question

11．高三學(xué)生在高考結(jié)束后將迎來很長(zhǎng)的一個(gè)暑假，很多學(xué)生已在為這個(gè)假期制定計(jì)劃．假設(shè)你是林敏，你的網(wǎng)友王華今年也將高中畢業(yè)，前幾天他通過郵件跟你講述了他的三個(gè)暑假計(jì)劃，分別是：
①參加一些學(xué)習(xí)班；
②做一份兼職工作；
③外出旅游．但由于時(shí)間安排的問題，只能做其中的兩件事情，至于如何選擇，王華猶豫不決．請(qǐng)你給王華回一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容需包括：
比較分析王華的三個(gè)計(jì)劃；
談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh，并陳述理由．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封電子郵件，幫助分析即將高中畢業(yè)的網(wǎng)友王華在暑假制定的三個(gè)計(jì)劃并提供建議，陳述理由．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱和第二人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．比較分析王華的三個(gè)計(jì)劃； 2．談?wù)勛约旱挠?jì)劃，并陳述理由．
重要短語：receive one's email （收到郵件），make plans （制定計(jì)劃），give sb some suggestions （給某人提供建議），find a part-time job （找一份兼職），take acourse （上課），places of interest （名勝古跡），pay a visit to sp （拜訪某處），some scenic sports （一些旅游景點(diǎn)），broaden one'shorizon （擴(kuò)大某人的視野），relax oneself （放松自己），as for （關(guān)于），be satisfied with （滿意），agree with （贊同），hangout with（與…閑逛，游玩）．
【高分句型】

1．The reason is that you can broaden your horizon and relax yourself after the tough exam．
這里是由that引導(dǎo)的表語從句，句子的主語是The reason，謂語動(dòng)詞是is，表語是that you can broaden your horizon and relax yourself after the tough exam，that在句中起連接詞的作用，無意義，不可省略．
2．I wish you could agree with my suggestions．
這里是省略that的賓語從句，從句 you could agree with my suggestions作動(dòng)詞wish的賓語，從句中使用了虛擬語氣，是對(duì)現(xiàn)在的虛擬，從句中用過去式．

解答 Dear Tom，
I am so glad to receive your email．I knew you had made three plans for the holiday，but you only have time to choose two from them．Now I am writing to give you some suggestions．（開頭引出話題）
Your plan to take a course after the exam and you want to find a part-time job．More importantly，you would like to travel to some places of interest．I think it is a good idea to take a course，because you can learn more knowledge through it．What's more，I hope you can pay a visit to some scenic sports．The reason is that you can broaden your horizon and relax yourself after the tough exam．【高分句型】As for finding a part-time job，it is not necessary，for you can have more chances to take a job．（比較分析王華的三個(gè)計(jì)劃）
Are you satisfied with it？I wish you could agree with my suggestions．【高分句型】
In this holiday，I will have a good rest，school life make me feel very tired，so I want to have a relaxing holiday，and I'll go somewhere interesting to enjoy myself or hang out with my best friends，and then I'll stay at home to help my parents to do some house work．Of course I'll use this holiday to read more great books to improve myself．And I'll do some exercise to make me more healthy，I'm sure I'll have a wonderful holiday．（談?wù)勛约旱挠?jì)劃，并陳述理由）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．