Question

【題目】書面表達

近些年來，隨著人們生活水平的日益改善，飼養(yǎng)寵物的人們的數(shù)量與日俱增。飼養(yǎng)寵物給人們帶來快樂的同時，也隨之帶來了一些問題。主要有：（一）、寵物發(fā)出的噪音非常擾民；（二）、動物的糞便會污染環(huán)境；（三）、當主人帶著寵物去公共場所時，有些寵物會嚇著孩子甚至咬人；（四）、 某些寵物會傳播疾病，已經(jīng)引起了人們的廣泛關注。

假如你是李華，請你就上面提到的人們飼養(yǎng)寵物帶了的問題給報社編輯寫一封信，尋求幫助， 并期待媒體能夠就解決該問題做一些事情。

注意：

1. 字數(shù)：100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 信的開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear editor,

I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, but ______________________________________

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear editor,

I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, but I really want to tell you something about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reasons.

First of all, as it is known to people, pets make much noise that troubles residents a lot. What’s more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, which makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even bite people. The most important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for this.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文要求寫一封信給報社編輯，內容包括兩方面：陳述寵物給我們生活帶來的麻煩以及尋求媒體的幫助。寫作時注意以下幾點：1.涵蓋所有內容。2、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時，以第一人稱為主。3、注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。：

【亮點說明】

文章使用了非常好的短語和句子給文章增色，如take sth into consideration 考慮到；as it is known to people 眾所周知；that引導的定語從句和which引導的非限制性定語從句；it is widely accepted that人們普遍認為；The most important is that最重要的是后接表語從句；還有First of all，What’s more等有效地使語句間連接緊湊。