Question

3．某中學生英文報近期開辟專欄，討論學習習慣問題．請你結(jié)合自身學習實際，按以下提示，用英文為該專欄寫一篇稿件．
（1）說明學習習慣與學習效果之間的關系；
（2）介紹一種好的學習習慣并提出養(yǎng)成該習慣的建議；
（3）描述自己在學習習慣方面存在的某個問題并給出改進措施．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)120左右，開頭語已為你寫好；
（2）可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱．
It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits．It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits．As we all know，learning habits play a key role in our study．Only if we form a good learning habit，can we learn efficiently．
Among learning habits，reviewing regularly is a most important one．If we go over our notes and textbook regularly，they will become more meaningful and be remembered easily．How should we do to develop such a good habit？I think making a practical plan and sticking to it will be of great help．In addition，I think it also important to turn to our teachers for advice．
But there also exit many problems．For example，I can't take down what the teachers say in class．To improve this situation，I decide to learn to take notes quickly and try to focus on the important points．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇稿件，討論學習習慣問題．
寫作時人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
寫作要點：1．說明學習習慣與學習效果之間的關系； 2．介紹一種好的學習習慣并提出養(yǎng)成該習慣的建議；3．描述自己在學習習慣方面存在的某個問題并給出改進措施．
重要短語：play a key role in（起關鍵作用），form a good learning habit（形成好的學習習慣），learn efficiently （有效學習），go over（復習），be meaningful（有意義），develop a good habit （培養(yǎng)好的習慣），stick to （堅持），be of great help（有幫助），in addition（除…之外還），turn to sb for advice （向某人尋求建議），take down （記下），take notes （記筆記），try to do sth（努力做某事），focus on…（集中于某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．Only if we form a good learning habit，can we learn efficiently．
此處是部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，結(jié)構(gòu)為"Only+【狀語成分：介詞短語/when、if引導的從句/時間副詞】+一般疑問句形式"．
【高分句型二】
2．I think making a practical plan and sticking to it will be of great help．
此處賓語從句中兩個并列的動名詞作主語，從句中的謂語動詞為"will be"，表語為"of great help"．
【高分句型三】
3．To improve this situation，I decide to learn to take notes quickly and try to focus on the important points．
此處是由不定式"to do"作目的狀語，主句為"I decide to learn to take notes quickly and try to focus on the important points"．

解答 It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits．As we all know，learning habits plays a key role in our study．Only if we form a good learning habit，can we learn efficiently．【高分句型一】（學習習慣與學習效果之間的關系）
Among learning habits，reviewing regularly is a most important one．If we go over our notes and textbook regularly，they will become more meaningful and be remembered easily．How should we do to develop such a good habit？I think making a practical plan and sticking to it will be of great help．【高分句型二】In addition，I think it also important to turn to our teachers for advice．（介紹一種好的學習習慣并提出建議）
But there also exist many problems．For example，I can't take down what the teachers say in class．To improve this situation，I decide to learn to take notes quickly and try to focus on the important points．【高分句型三】（描述問題并給出改進措施）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．