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18．假如你是李明，在學(xué)校發(fā)現(xiàn)許多不文明行為，如隨地吐痰、亂涂亂畫(huà)、亂丟垃圾等，請(qǐng)你給學(xué)校文學(xué)社寫(xiě)一封信，呼吁同學(xué)們提高素質(zhì)、創(chuàng)建美麗校園．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1．你所看到的不文明行為及危害；
2．為建設(shè)美麗校園，提出你的倡議（至少兩點(diǎn)）．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100～120；
2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名．
參考詞匯：吐痰spit； 刻畫(huà) scratch； 不文明行為immoral behaviors
Dear editor，
I am writing to tell you about what I saw while studying in the school．
                                           
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 假如你是李明，在學(xué)校發(fā)現(xiàn)許多不文明行為，如隨地吐痰、亂涂亂畫(huà)、亂丟垃圾等，請(qǐng)你給學(xué)校文學(xué)社寫(xiě)一封信，呼吁同學(xué)們提高素質(zhì)、創(chuàng)建美麗校園．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1．你所看到的不文明行為及危害；2．為建設(shè)美麗中國(guó)，提出你的倡議（至少兩點(diǎn)）．3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．4．不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名．寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫(xiě)全，語(yǔ)句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】I was surprised to see so many immoral behaviors in public places．運(yùn)用固定句式；Some people spit at will wherever they went； some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots，which did great damage to them．運(yùn)用定語(yǔ)從句；In my opinion，it's high time we should take action to help improve the situation．運(yùn)用定語(yǔ)從句；Last but not least，we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did．運(yùn)用賓語(yǔ)從句；Second，our media should also take responsibility to guide people to protect the environment．此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次．
Some people spit at will wherever they went； some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots，which did great damage to them．（高分句型一）
In my opinion，it's high time we should take action to help improve the situation．（高分句型二）
Last but not least，we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did．（高分句型三）
Only by working together can we make our country become more and more beautiful!（高分句型四）

解答 Dear editor，
       I am writing to tell you about what I saw while traveling during this winter vacation．
       I was surprised to see so many immoral behaviors in public places．Some people spit at will wherever they went； some scratched their names on the street walls or other scenic spots，which did great damage to them．（高分句型一）
       In my opinion，it's high time we should take action to help improve the situation．（高分句型二）First，certain laws should be passed to ensure people won't damage the environment．Second，our media should also take responsibility to guide people to protect the environment．Last but not least，we travelers should learn to be more responsible for what we did．（高分句型三）
       Only by working together can we make our country become more and more beautiful!（高分句型四）
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

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