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12．假設(shè)你是李華，你校英文報(bào)"My Point of View"一欄擬刊登"家庭與孩子成長"有關(guān)的內(nèi)容．現(xiàn)在很多家庭只有一個(gè)孩子，這樣的環(huán)境對孩子的成長是否有利？如果一個(gè)家庭可以有兩個(gè)孩子，那對孩子的成長又有什么樣的利弊？請你就這個(gè)話題給校報(bào)編輯寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Editor，
With the implementing of family planning policy，most families have only one child．                           ．

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分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你校英文報(bào)"My Point of View"一欄擬刊登"家庭與孩子成長"有關(guān)的內(nèi)容．現(xiàn)在很多家庭只有一個(gè)孩子，這樣的環(huán)境對孩子的成長是否有利？如果一個(gè)家庭可以有兩個(gè)孩子，那對孩子的成長又有什么樣的利弊？請你就這個(gè)話題給校報(bào)編輯寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶�，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從利和弊兩個(gè)方面來討論該話題 2、提示是文章的總體框架，要在適當(dāng)范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：the lack of缺乏；deal with處理；basically基本上；contribute to有助于；take care of照顧；be beneficial to對…有益；in my view以我的觀點(diǎn)來看
There are lots of problems with these children，one of which is the lack of the ability to deal with other people．（高分句型一） 
Recently a new policy has been adjusted nationwide，which allows a family to have two children．（高分句型二）ln the process of growing，the two can take care of each other，and share too much in common，which is beneficial to their character building and psychological health．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Editor，
       With the implementing of family planning policy，most families have only one child．There are lots of problems with these children，one of which is the lack of the ability to deal with other people．（高分句型一） Basically，when born in a family without siblings，a child is usually vain and arrogant，even sometimes indifferentand rebellious．All these disadvantages may contribute to unhappiness of his or her life．
       Recently a new policy has been adjusted nationwide，which allows a family to have two children．（高分句型二）ln the process of growing，the two can take care of each other，and share too much in common，which is beneficial to their character building and psychological health．（高分句型三）
        In my view，it is better to have two children in a family than only one．
                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours Sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

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