Question

閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
An increasing number of students fall in love at an early age and create problems with their studies, which has aroused the school’s attention. A middle school has set a "distance for civilized communication" between boy and girl students. Boys and girls should keep a distance of at least 50 centimeters when they talk in public, otherwise they will be criticized or get an even severer punishment, says an article in Beijing News.
It seems that the school has passed the school regulation to prevent girls and boys from falling in love at an early age and creating problems for the school authorities. Some teachers and parents approve of the regulation because it is of vital importance to the teenagers’ study. However, many experts say the problem, if it is one, can be better solved through communication.
It is natural for a teenager to have a feeling of love on someone from the opposite sex. It is natural for girls and boys to be attracted to each other as they mature sexually.
In fact, normal communication between boy and girl students is good not only for their emotional development and personality refinement, but also for their relationship when they grow up.
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1．以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。
2．以約120個(gè)詞描述“文明交往距離規(guī)定”的利弊，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)異性交往的看法。
[寫作要求]
1．作文中可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

Answer 1

From the article, we know a school has set a regulation about civilized communication between boys and girls to prevent students falling in love at an early age, which has caused different opinions.（33 words）
In our daily school life some students can’t resist the opposite gender’s attraction，disturbing themselves. With such a school rule carried out, it’s of great help for them to take control of themselves and realize the harm of abnormal communication. Meanwhile, however, it’s not good for the students’ emotional development and normal relationship.
Personally, I hold a right attitude towards communication with the opposite gender. I’ll get on well with my classmates no matter whether they are boys or girls, but keeping a certain personal distance is extremely necessary. It’s of great importance for me to bury myself in my school work before I regret only because of my puppy（early）love.  

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)寫作，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認(rèn)真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達(dá)給了一段材料：先要求以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個(gè)詞寫一篇短文，按照要點(diǎn)去表達(dá)，不能有遺漏，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時(shí)盡量使用自己會(huì)的單詞、詞組和句型，同時(shí)也要注意使用一些高級(jí)語(yǔ)法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】概括部分語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，也概括了重點(diǎn)：From the article, we know a school has set a regulation about civilized communication between boys and girls to prevent students falling in love at an early age, which has caused different opinions.（33 words）正文觀點(diǎn)明確，有理有據(jù)，不乏好的短語(yǔ)和句子： With such a school rule carried out, it’s of great help for them to take control of themselves and realize the harm of abnormal communication. 這句話用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)和it做形式主語(yǔ)的句型。. I’ll get on well with my classmates no matter whether they are boys or girls, but keeping a certain personal distance is extremely necessary. 這句話用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，It’s of great importance for me to bury myself in my school work before I regret only because of my puppy（early）love. 這句話也用了it做形式主語(yǔ)。還有范文還使用了 Meanwhile, however, Personally,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。