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3．假定你是李華，是一名高一學(xué)生．最近，你校廣播站面向全體學(xué)生招募兩名英語播音員．你很想嘗試一下，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一封自薦信：
1．對播音感興趣，夢想成為一名播音員（announcer），受過專業(yè)訓(xùn)練；
2．擅長英語，去年獲得英語競賽一等獎(jiǎng)；
3．希望被錄�。�
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a student in Grade1I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcers，so I'm writing to introduce myself．First of all，I am greatly interested in broadcasting．I have received some professional training in my spare time，hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future．（高分句型一）Now I would like to put what I have learned into practice and gain some experience． Besides，I am good at English，especially spoken English．I won first prize in the English Speech Competition last year．So I think I am highly qualified for the job．If （I am） admitted，I will try my best to serve the students．（高分句型二）I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to work for the school radio station．（高分句型三）
I am looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，是一名高一學(xué)生．最近，你校廣播站面向全體學(xué)生招募兩名英語播音員．你很想嘗試一下，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一封自薦信，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：對播音感興趣，夢想成為一名播音員（announcer），受過專業(yè)訓(xùn)練；擅長英語，去年獲得英語競賽一等獎(jiǎng)；希望被錄取．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：First of all首先；put…into practice把…投入實(shí)踐；Besides另外；be good at 擅長；look forward to盼望；
I have received some professional training in my spare time，hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future．（高分句型一）
If （I am） admitted，I will try my best to serve the students．（高分句型二）
I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to work for the school radio station．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I am Li Hua．I am a student in Grade 1．I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcers，so I'm writing to introduce myself．First of all，I am greatly interested in broadcasting．I have received some professional training in my spare time，hoping that I can work as an announcer in the future．（高分句型一）Now I would like to put what I have learned into practice and gain some experience． Besides，I am good at English，especially spoken English．I won first prize in the English Speech Competition last year．So I think I am highly qualified for the job．If （I am） admitted，I will try my best to serve the students．（高分句型二）I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to work for the school radio station．（高分句型三）       I am looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．