Question

假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華。上周你班組織志愿活動(dòng)，清理地鐵內(nèi)小廣告和垃圾。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，用英語寫一篇周記，記述從討論到活動(dòng)實(shí)施的全過程。
注意： 1. 周記的開頭已為你寫好。
2. 詞數(shù)不少于60。
提示詞：小廣告 adlets

Last week, our class organized a voluntary activity in subway cars.___________________
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Answer 1

Last week, our class organized a voluntary activity in subway cars.
On Friday, we held a class meeting to discuss what we could do at the weekend. Some suggested telling passengers to keep the subway cars clean, while the others preferred to pick up adlets and litter. Finally we decided to do the latter.
At 9:00 on Sunday morning, plastic bags in our hands, we gathered at the school gate and headed for the subway station. Upon arrival, we started to work. It was not so easy as we had expected because some adlets were stuck to the floor and seats. Seeing what we were doing, many passengers smiled at us in approval. Soon the subway cars became clean again. Two hours later, our work was finished. When we piled the litter bags on the platform, a conductor praised us with her thumb up. Though tired, we felt proud and happy.

試題分析：本文是看圖作文，首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文第二段簡述事情的經(jīng)過。第三段論述詳細(xì)的過程。這種三段式結(jié)構(gòu)使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明。此外作者還使用Upon arrival, we started to work.一。。就的表達(dá)方式；Seeing what we were doing, many passengers smiled at us in approval.這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用到了非謂語動(dòng)詞。Though tired, we felt proud and happy這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用狀語從句的省略。