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15．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生會主席．近來，隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及，學(xué)生的漢字書寫能力降低．為了保護(hù)傳統(tǒng)民族文化--漢字，校學(xué)生會提出倡議．請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，為學(xué)�！队⒄Z沙龍》的同學(xué)們寫一封倡議書．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1．少上網(wǎng)，多讀書、勤記筆記；
2．養(yǎng)成練書寫和寫日記的習(xí)慣；
3．自擬一項(xiàng)其他方面的倡議內(nèi)容．
注意：短文字?jǐn)?shù)不少于100詞．參考詞匯：漢字Chinese characters
Dear friends，
In recent years，many of us spend a lot of time on the Internet with its popularity．As a result，our handwriting is not so good as it was in the past．In order to protect our Chinese characters and write both nicely and neatly，we'd like to offer some suggestions：（高分句型一）
We should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books and newspaper．（高分句型二）We'd better form the habit of practicing calligraphy and keeping diaries every day．Besides，it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails．（高分句型三）As the saying goes，"The style is the man．"Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students．So please pay more attention to our handwriting in the future．
Let's take action now!
Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 本篇寫作要求我們寫倡議書，首先注意語氣和倡議書的格式，其實(shí)作文結(jié)構(gòu)可分為以下幾部分：①由于網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及，我們疏忽了我們的傳統(tǒng)漢字．為了保護(hù)我們的漢字文化，提出幾點(diǎn)建議．②少上網(wǎng)，多讀書看報(bào)，經(jīng)常練習(xí)書法和寫作；③嘗試給朋友親筆寫信；④從現(xiàn)在做起，關(guān)注我們的中華文化．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：As a result結(jié)果；so good as 和…一樣好；In order to以便，為了；form the habit of形成…的習(xí)慣；Besides另外；As the saying goes正如諺語所說；pay more attention to多加關(guān)注；
In order to protect our Chinese characters and write both nicely and neatly，we'd like to offer some suggestions：（高分句型一）
We should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books and newspaper．（高分句型二）
Besides，it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear friends，
      In recent years，many of us spend a lot of time on the Internet with its popularity．As a result，our handwriting is not so good as it was in the past．In order to protect our Chinese characters and write both nicely and neatly，we'd like to offer some suggestions：（高分句型一）
     We should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books and newspaper．（高分句型二）We'd better form the habit of practicing calligraphy and keeping diaries every day．Besides，it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails．（高分句型三）As the saying goes，"The style is the man．"Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students．So please pay more attention to our handwriting in the future．
      Let's take action now!
                                                                                                                                                                                         Students'Union

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．