Question

6．假設(shè)你是李華，日前參加了在加拿大舉行的為期四周的國際中學(xué)生生存訓(xùn)練營活動，并將作為中國學(xué)生代表在閉幕式上發(fā)言．請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，要點包括：
（1）遇到的挑戰(zhàn)（語言、交往、文化沖擊等）；
（2）你的收獲；
（3）感謝組織者．
注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：文化沖擊culture shock
Dear friends，
I am honoured to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp．
Before I came to Canada，I had made careful preparations for this camp．However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making myself understood，talking with others from several countries，and dealing with culture shock．With great patience and kindness，the organizers helped me out．The four weeks in the camp has changed me greatly．Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships．Most importantly，I became more confident．So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making myself understood，talking with others from several countries，and dealing with culture shock
然而，我還是經(jīng)歷了一些意想不到的挑戰(zhàn)，比如做自己理解的困難，與一些國家的人談話，和處理文化沖擊．
高分句型二：
Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships．
我不僅提高了我的英語口語，還得到了終身的友誼．

解答 One possible version：
   I am honoured to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp．Before I came to Canada，I had made careful preparations for this camp．However，I still experienced some unexpected challenges，such as the difficulty in making myself understood，talking with others from several countries，and dealing with culture shock（高分句型一）．With great patience and kindness，the organizers helped me out．The four weeks in the camp has changed me greatly．Not only did I improve my oral English，but I also made lifelong friendships（高分句型二）．Most importantly，I became more confident．So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．