Question

【題目】為了減少環(huán)境污染、緩解城市交通壓力，2018年1月1日我市開(kāi)始實(shí)施新的機(jī)動(dòng)車(chē)限號(hào)行駛規(guī)定（the license number-plate restrictions)。假定你最近就我市實(shí)施這一新規(guī)定進(jìn)行了采訪，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文,向某英語(yǔ)報(bào)投稿。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 限號(hào)帶來(lái)的好處；

2. 限號(hào)存在的問(wèn)題；

3. 你的看法及改進(jìn)建議。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently I made a survey on the new license number-plate restrictions which have been adopted in our city since January 1, 2018.

Many people agree that the system to some extent, has reduced the environment pollution and relieved the pressure of transportation. However, every coin has two sides. Many car owners complain that it is annoying that they are not allowed to drive their own cars, especially when something is urgent.

In my opinion, for the benefit of the public, it is worthwhile to sacrifice part of personal convenience. However, I think it will be better if that government provide more means of public transportation for citizens and reduce the fans.

【解析】這是一篇典型的議論文體的寫(xiě)作。本題給了一個(gè)話(huà)題，以提綱的形式提出了論點(diǎn)（限號(hào)帶來(lái)的好處及存在的問(wèn)題）及需要考生自由發(fā)揮的部分（你的看法及改進(jìn)意見(jiàn)）。對(duì)于限號(hào)的好處及存在的問(wèn)題，沒(méi)有具體給出。自己的看法可選擇上述中的任何一種，并就此發(fā)表個(gè)人的見(jiàn)解。此題給了學(xué)生一定的想象空間，有利于學(xué)生的發(fā)揮。本文可用三段成文形式成文。

亮點(diǎn)分析：本文句式靈活多變，復(fù)雜句運(yùn)用恰到好處，在復(fù)雜句中含有定語(yǔ)從句，名詞從句及狀語(yǔ)從句。語(yǔ)言比較嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，運(yùn)用了較高級(jí)的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)文中還運(yùn)用了許多較高級(jí)的詞匯，如to some extent, every coin has two sides, In my opinion，for the benefit of the public，it is worthwhile to do, sacrifice part of personal convenience. Provide…for…等。文章結(jié)構(gòu)如下：

第一段提出話(huà)題。在本段中運(yùn)用一個(gè)由which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句… which have been adopted in our city since January 1, 2018.

第二段主要敘述限號(hào)的好處及存在的問(wèn)題。運(yùn)用一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句來(lái)表達(dá)出限號(hào)的好處。（Many people agree that the system to some extent, has reduced the environment pollution and relieved the pressure of transportation. ）接著用轉(zhuǎn)折連詞However，引出限號(hào)存在的問(wèn)題時(shí)運(yùn)用一句諺語(yǔ)“ every coin has two sides.”來(lái)說(shuō)明任何事情都有利有弊，再用一個(gè)復(fù)雜句（Many car owners complain that it is annoying that they are not allowed to drive their own cars, especially when something is urgent.）說(shuō)明其存在的問(wèn)題。

最后一段提出自己的看法及改進(jìn)意見(jiàn)。在本段中運(yùn)用一個(gè)常用句式“it is worthwhile to do something”及復(fù)雜句（I think it will be better if that government provide more mans of public transportation for citizens and reduce the fans.）。這個(gè)復(fù)雜句是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句中含有一個(gè)由if引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句。