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根據(jù)新聞報(bào)道，每年全國在餐館里被倒掉的食物估計(jì)可養(yǎng)活2億人。中國開展了“光盤”運(yùn)動(dòng)。請(qǐng)以“Against Food Waste”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：

就餐浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因	中國人熱情好客的傳統(tǒng)； 2. ……
光盤運(yùn)動(dòng)的意義	提高公眾珍惜食物的意識(shí)； ……
結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勛约旱淖龇?/p>	（至少提出2個(gè)做法）

注意：      1．陳述所給要點(diǎn)，可適度發(fā)揮，但不要簡單翻譯。

              2．詞數(shù)150 左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3．參考詞匯：好客hospitality；打包make a doggie bag

Against Food Waste

According to reports, the leftovers in restaurants across the country are almost enough to feed 200 million people annually. Therefore, China has taken on a national campaign “Eat up all on the Plates”.

 

Answer 1

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One possible version:

Against Food Waste

According to reports, the leftovers in restaurants across the country are almost enough to feed 200 million people annually. Therefore, China has taken on a national campaign “Eat up all on the Plates”.

It is a tradition for most people in China to entertain their guests with more than enough food, believing that they have not satisfied their guests if there is no food left on the table, which they think is a good way to show their hospitality. They think they will be looked down upon if they make a doggie bag of the leftovers. As a result, restaurant trashcans are often found full of leftover foods, with full plates untouched.

The “Eat up all on the Plates” campaign is intended to reduce the waste and raise people’s awareness. It has been warmly welcomed with positive responses. As middle school students, we should do our bit to say “No” to food waste, and try to develop the habit of never ordering or cooking more than what we need so as to save our limited food resources, on which we depend for a better life.

【解析】

試題分析：

本文是篇材料作文，材料不是那么簡單，學(xué)生要把握寫作要求和寫作目的必須經(jīng)過分析。考生在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求讓你寫一篇新聞報(bào)道，寫討論的結(jié)構(gòu)如何，因此本文必須用第三人稱。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。本文涉及的生詞不少，根據(jù)提綱和新聞報(bào)道要求，學(xué)生要有一定的詞匯量才能組織好材料。適當(dāng)?shù)难诱箓�(gè)別細(xì)節(jié)再加上所給的提示，考生注意寫清楚以下幾點(diǎn)：1.主題，2. 浪費(fèi)的原因，3. 關(guān)盤行動(dòng)的意義，4. 作者自己的看法，5. 恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾，就能較好的發(fā)揮出來。當(dāng)然在書寫上，要干凈整潔的卷面與字?jǐn)?shù)要求，一般能達(dá)到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如；entertain … with…; more than; enough …, satisfy sb. ; a good way to do sth.; look down upon As a result,  warmly welcomed ;As middle school students; develop the habit of doing; so as to; depend on;

還運(yùn)用了It is a tradition for most people in China to entertain their guests with more than enough food, believing that they have not satisfied their guests if there is no food left on the table, which they think is a good way to show their hospitality. which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句;if 引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句等。是一篇佳作。

考點(diǎn)：圖表式作文