Question

15．假設你是李津．你校英語�？�正在舉辦"E-books or Paper Books"的征文，請你用英語談一下你對此的看法．
短文應包含以下要點：
1．電子書的優(yōu)勢（如便宜，容易攜帶，節(jié)省空間等）；
2．紙質書的優(yōu)勢（如對眼睛傷害較少）；
3．談談你的看法．
注意：
1．詞數：不少于100；
2．可適當加入細節(jié)，以使行文連貫：
3．文章開頭已為你寫好，不計入詞數．
There is a heated discussion among my fellow students over the choice between…There is a heated discussion among my fellow students over the choice between e-books or paper books．
（高分句型一） Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books，one of which is its cheapness．Most e-books are much cheaper compared with paper books．Besides，they take up little space compared with paper books．（電子書的優(yōu)點）
Others don't agree with them．They argue that reading from screens for a long time does too much harm to eyes，while comfortableness that paper books bring to readers always matters most to them．（電子書的缺點）
However，as a student without too much pocket money，I prefer to read e-books．（高分句型二）What's more，my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time．Therefore I would rather choose e-books at the cost of reading comfortableness．（我的看法）．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，你校英語�？�正在舉辦"E-books or Paper Books"的征文，請你用英語談一下你對此的看法本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準確表達．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，注意要適當拓展，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化．
（高分句型一） Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books，one of which is its cheapness．
該句使用that引導同位語從句，作為view的內容；which引導非限制性定語從句．
高分句型二）What's more，my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time．
so…that…如此以至于，句意為我的日程安排如此緊張以至于選擇電子書節(jié)省很多時間．
高級詞匯：advantage優(yōu)點；compared with與…相比；take up占據；would rather寧愿．

解答 There is a heated discussion among my fellow students over the choice between e-books or paper books． 
        Some hold the view that e-books have so many advantages over paper books，one of which is its cheapness．（高分句型一）Most e-books are much cheaper compared with paper books．Besides，they take up little space compared with paper books．（電子書的優(yōu)點）
       Others don't agree with them．They argue that reading from screens for a long time does too much harm to eyes，while comfortableness that paper books bring to readers always matters most to them．（電子書的缺點）
       However，as a student without too much pocket money，I prefer to read e-books．What's more，my schedule is so tight that choosing e-books online saves a lot of time．（高分句型二）Therefore I would rather choose e-books at the cost of reading comfortableness．（我的看法）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．