Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Simon發(fā)來電子郵件說他準(zhǔn)備暑假來中國旅游，想要你推薦兩三座歷史文化名城，請你給他回封郵件，并說明推薦的理由。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Simon,

I am glad to learn that you will visit China this summer.

You want to visit just a few beautiful cities in China. I suggest you should travel to Beijing and Nanjing, because these two cities have well preserved traditional Chinese culture and have numerous places of interest. Beijing is now the capital of China, which lies in North China, and Nanjing, a large city on the Yangtze River in South China, used to be where quite a few dynasties founded their capital. I believe you will enjoy these two ancient and modern cities. If time permits, you can as well visit another modern large city Shanghai, which is very near Nanjing.

Hoping to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一份郵件，向來中國旅行的朋友推薦兩三座歷史文化古城，并介紹相關(guān)情況。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.知曉來訪

2.推薦古城

1）推薦原因

2）古城介紹

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

be glad to; well preserved traditional Chinese culture; numerous places of interest; ancient and modern cities; as well; hear from

第三步：連詞成句

1. I am glad to learn that you will visit China this summer.

2. I suggest you should travel to Beijing and Nanjing, because these two cities have well preserved traditional Chinese culture and have numerous places of interest.

3. Beijing is now the capital of China, which lies in North China, and Nanjing, a large city on the Yangtze River in South China, used to be where quite a few dynasties founded their capital.

4. I believe you will enjoy these two ancient and modern cities.

5. If time permits, you can as well visit another modern large city Shanghai, which is very near Nanjing.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改