Question

【題目】短文寫作

請觀察所給的圖畫并根據你對該圖畫的理解寫一篇英語短文，內容包括：

（1）簡要描述圖片，并說明該圖片所揭露的現象；

（2）分析造成該現象的原因（至少兩點）；

（3）提出自己的看法。

要求：1. 詞數150左右。開頭已經給出，不計入詞數。

2. 文章中不得提及考生所在學校及本人姓名。

The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that allows students to gain insight to useful resources and information. However, this is not always the case.

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Answer 1

【答案】

The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that allows students to gain insight to useful resources and information. However, this is not always the case.

As is vividly shown in the picture, a boy is happy with the fact that he can depend on the Internet to finish tasks without any difficulty. It mirrors a common phenomenon. Nowadays, students tend to make use of the Internet to gain information they need.

There are some reasons accounting for it. To begin with, students find it convenient to surf the Internet for useful information, where problems can be solved with the help of several clicks. What’s more, there’s no doubt that the pressure to succeed also causes students to turn to computers for accurate answers. As a result, it’s likely that students will lose interest in studying, which is not beneficial to their overall development.

In my opinion, measures must be taken to solve the problem. Firstly, it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves and their abilities while doing tasks. Besides, what teachers and parents should do is to encourage students to be creative. Finally, doing tasks independently is of great significance.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是看圖作文，所給指向非常明確，就是學生在網上搜題的答案，不再動腦筋做題。文章可以分三段來寫：第一段描述圖片并說明該圖片所揭露的現象；第二段分析造成該現象的原因，注意至少要講兩點；第三段提出自己的看法，總結全文。寫作時可適當添加細節(jié)以使行文連貫。注意使用高級詞匯和高級句子提升文章檔次。

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