Question

假定你是李華， 你的美國(guó)老師Miss Morgan要求你們明天下午去聽一個(gè)有關(guān)美國(guó)文化的講座。你因故不能參加。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)， 寫一封短信向Miss Morgan請(qǐng)假。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

表示歉意

理由： 去機(jī)場(chǎng)接從法國(guó)回來的舅舅

詢問：是否有講座錄音，以便補(bǔ)聽講座

注意： 1. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右

2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

3. 參考詞匯： 請(qǐng)假--- ask for leave of absence

彌補(bǔ)--- make up for

Dear Miss Morgan,

        I’m so sorry that                                                 

                                                                                            

                                                                                            

                                                                                             

                                                                                            

                                                                                            

                                                                                             

                                                                                            

                                                                                             

                                                                                            

                                                                                            

Thank you.

Yours sincerely ,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Miss Morgan,

I’m so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American culture tomorrow afternoon.

My uncle is returning home from France , and I’ve promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30tomorrow afternoon.

I’m very interested in American society and culture. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded , and if so , could I borrow the tape?  It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and make up for what is covered in the talk. I would appreciate it if you could allow me to ask for leave of absence.

Thank you .

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)是要求寫一封信。同學(xué)們對(duì)于書信這種題材已經(jīng)非常熟悉，而且要求內(nèi)容比較簡(jiǎn)單。同學(xué)們?cè)趯懽鲿r(shí)要注意書信的格式要正確，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，而且要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，順暢。此外本文是向老師請(qǐng)假，要注意語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔明了，語(yǔ)氣委婉客氣。在時(shí)態(tài)方面要根據(jù)情況恰當(dāng)選擇。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。使用簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)言表述了不能出席的理由以及自己的請(qǐng)求，敘述清晰明了，不拖泥帶水。文中I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded , and if so , could I borrow the tape?以及I would appreciate it if you could allow me to ask for leave of absence.等表述請(qǐng)求部分用詞準(zhǔn)確貼切，語(yǔ)氣委婉禮貌，顯示了作者對(duì)語(yǔ)言很強(qiáng)的運(yùn)用能力。

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