15.假定你是李華,最近在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了一些問題.你給筆友Allen寫了一封信,希望得到他的幫助.內(nèi)容如下:
1.學(xué)習(xí)熱情減退;
2.作業(yè)太多,疲于應(yīng)付;
3.…
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫.
參考詞匯:減退weaken
Dear Allen,
How are you?These days I am faced with some problems about my English study,which has confused me long.So I am writing this letter for your advice.(高分句型一)
First of all,my wish to study hard and get good grades has been weakened with time going by.(高分句型二)More often,I find English so boring that I fall asleep in class.Besides,it seems to have endless homework,and to finish it I have to copy others'.What's worse,I am becoming weaker and weaker in this subject.It isnecessary for me to find a tutor who can help me with my English.(高分句型三)
That's all.I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華,最近在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了一些問題.你給筆友Allen寫了一封信,希望得到他的幫助,寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點(diǎn)包括:學(xué)習(xí)熱情減退;作業(yè)太多,疲于應(yīng)付;2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫.本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):be faced with 面對(duì);First of all首先;What's worse而且;lend me a hand幫我一下
These days I am faced with some problems about my English study,which has confused me long.So I am writing this letter for your advice.(高分句型一)
 First of all,my wish to study hard and get good grades has been weakened with time going by.(高分句型二)
It is necessary for me to find a tutor who can help me with my English.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Allen,
      How are you?These days I am faced with some problems about my English study,which has confused me long.So I am writing this letter for your advice.(高分句型一)
      First of all,my wish to study hard and get good grades has been weakened with time going by.(高分句型二)More often,I find English so boring that I fall asleep in class.Besides,it seems to have endless homework,and to finish it I have to copy others'.What's worse,I am becoming weaker and weaker in this subject.It is necessary for me to find a tutor who can help me with my English.(高分句型三)
     That's all.I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand.
                                                                                                                         Yours,
                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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