Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華。校學(xué)生會(huì)將于本月底舉辦高中英語戲劇比賽，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息，給你班的美國交換生Peter寫封郵件，告知這件事。郵件的內(nèi)容包括：

1. 比賽的具體時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；

2. 比賽的目的；

3. 懇請(qǐng)Peter參加。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于50；

2. 郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I’m writing to tell you about the English play competition to be held this month. It will be held in the lecture hall at 4:00 p.m. on November 30th. The students’ union organizes this activity in order to motivate us to learn English and enrich our after-class lives. Each class is required to perform one short play which will be written and directed by students themselves. We all hope you can join us to perform a wonderful play for our class.

Looking forward to your active participation.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類作文，要點(diǎn)已給出，寫作時(shí)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文是一篇電子郵件，格式正確，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，運(yùn)用高級(jí)句子。I’m writing to tell you about the English play competition to be held this month.動(dòng)詞不定式一般式的被動(dòng)式作后置定語；It will be held in the lecture hall at 4:00 p.m. on November 30th. 一般將來時(shí)態(tài)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)；The students’ union organizes this activity in order to motivate us to learn English and enrich our after-class lives.運(yùn)用目的狀語；Each class is required to perform one short play which will be written and directed by students themselves.句中使用定語從句；We all hope you can join us to perform a wonderful play for our class. 賓語從句恰到好處。